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Array ( [sid] => 46161 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Coffee at 1am [time] => 2004-05-04 14:13:41 [hometext] => a cup brings inspiration with itself [bodytext] => The coffee
is salty
tears falling down leave circles behind
three lumps and it still tastes bitter
black liquid in a black cup
for my blue soul
too hot, burns my tongue
I swallow with almost masochistic pleasure
pain pushes away thoughts of you
it hurts
but clutch it for dear life
starts getting cold
yearning floods back into my head
staring outside the window
empty, lonely room
fill it love, fill it!
and forever we will share…
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Coffee at 1am

Contributed by dAWn on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:13:41 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The coffee
is salty
tears falling down leave circles behind
three lumps and it still tastes bitter
black liquid in a black cup
for my blue soul
too hot, burns my tongue
I swallow with almost masochistic pleasure
pain pushes away thoughts of you
it hurts
but clutch it for dear life
starts getting cold
yearning floods back into my head
staring outside the window
empty, lonely room
fill it love, fill it!
and forever we will share…

Copyright © dAWn ... [ 2004-05-04 14:13:41]
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Re: Coffee at 1am (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:35:05 PM AEST
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Another definition for loneliness and a very good one, though I like the ending better

Re: Coffee at 1am (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:35:10 PM AEST
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Another definition for loneliness and a very good one, though I like the ending better

Re: Coffee at 1am (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:22:33 PM AEST
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oi vey... that's why i settle on coffee on the day and gargle pop in the night! great write... ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Coffee at 1am (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:47:14 PM AEST
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fantastic write...such an emotionally charged piece of writing...great stuff

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