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Array ( [sid] => 46131 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Last Wishes [time] => 2004-05-04 11:00:06 [hometext] => Manic depression is killing me [bodytext] => The emptiness that’s growing inside me
Loneliness and ***** up lies, are the minority now
You’re not there to hear me cry, hold me while I’m alone
Always a never ending misfortune that I live with
Tears of toxic waste, drowning me in your puddle of lies.
Disoriented and confused.
I’m falling into this world of unknown being, washed aside.
My heart’s reached the bottom of this empty well.
Push me in, cast me aside, and kill me until I see the light no more.
Make me into a myth, sketched into your thoughts.
Try to forget me, even though I’ll never really die.
Never will I rest until you go insane,
Pay your price for leaving me astray.
Knowing how much damage you’ve done, only because you wouldn’t hand me a gun.
End this strife, everything in this ***** up life.
Will I ever receive my last wishes?:
To see you smiling, admitting everything you said, was full of lies.
Misleading and unpredictable.
Always alone in my river of cries.
How much more will it take, for you to be satisfied?
Does it make you happy inside, to see how this story will end?
Knowing I won’t be around tomorrow, to remind you
Of the heartless creature that lies inside you.
I’ll be free and you’ll be left here, with no one by your side.
Because pretty soon, I’m going to die.
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Last Wishes

Contributed by Fairy on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 11:00:06 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The emptiness that’s growing inside me
Loneliness and ***** up lies, are the minority now
You’re not there to hear me cry, hold me while I’m alone
Always a never ending misfortune that I live with
Tears of toxic waste, drowning me in your puddle of lies.
Disoriented and confused.
I’m falling into this world of unknown being, washed aside.
My heart’s reached the bottom of this empty well.
Push me in, cast me aside, and kill me until I see the light no more.
Make me into a myth, sketched into your thoughts.
Try to forget me, even though I’ll never really die.
Never will I rest until you go insane,
Pay your price for leaving me astray.
Knowing how much damage you’ve done, only because you wouldn’t hand me a gun.
End this strife, everything in this ***** up life.
Will I ever receive my last wishes?:
To see you smiling, admitting everything you said, was full of lies.
Misleading and unpredictable.
Always alone in my river of cries.
How much more will it take, for you to be satisfied?
Does it make you happy inside, to see how this story will end?
Knowing I won’t be around tomorrow, to remind you
Of the heartless creature that lies inside you.
I’ll be free and you’ll be left here, with no one by your side.
Because pretty soon, I’m going to die.

Copyright © Fairy ... [ 2004-05-04 11:00:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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