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the whole world was waken and shaken up by terrorism.
When the thundering aircrafts brought down the twin towers
The hearts of the people scattered in to thousand pieces.
It is so hard to see people are falling down
from buildings to the death.
It is so tearful to see people were burning
alive in side the buildings
It is so fearful to watch people crushing down with the buildings
Parents lost their children and children lost their parents
Brothers lost their sisters and sisters lost their brothers
Friends lost their friends and loved one lost their loved one
The pain and sorrow covered entire world and the wet tears rolling
The prayers are conducted to those people who lost their life
We reached the moon but we have not achieved peace on earth
Our law and order ignore our needs and
terriorist are filled in our nation
This is the time to eliminate those evil who are against human beings
Let us pray for peace and love in the new world and
to the heaven upon holding us on its wings of love and safe hands.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam
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Tears of New York city......

Contributed by ravisada on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:09:10 AM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy

On the day of New York city was attacked
the whole world was waken and shaken up by terrorism.
When the thundering aircrafts brought down the twin towers
The hearts of the people scattered in to thousand pieces.
It is so hard to see people are falling down
from buildings to the death.
It is so tearful to see people were burning
alive in side the buildings
It is so fearful to watch people crushing down with the buildings
Parents lost their children and children lost their parents
Brothers lost their sisters and sisters lost their brothers
Friends lost their friends and loved one lost their loved one
The pain and sorrow covered entire world and the wet tears rolling
The prayers are conducted to those people who lost their life
We reached the moon but we have not achieved peace on earth
Our law and order ignore our needs and
terriorist are filled in our nation
This is the time to eliminate those evil who are against human beings
Let us pray for peace and love in the new world and
to the heaven upon holding us on its wings of love and safe hands.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam

Copyright © ravisada ... [ 2004-05-04 08:09:10]
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Re: Tears of New York city...... (User Rating: 1 )
by 01_zanzebar on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 10:47:44 AM AEST
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Despite the fact that Mohammed Atta, with his expert CIA training was allowed to do this cos the US still thought they would do the same to China, and how we all mourn the deaths of a mere 3 or 4 thousand Americans, but laugh at soviet Russia for the fact that the taliban got paid over $4 billion for the terrorism during the eighties, and how 1.5 million Iraqi children lay dead from sanction, and how the US bombed penicillin factories in Kosovo because they looked like munitions factories is no big issue. Please just wake up. I hate to say it, but Osama Bin Laden was right in ever one of his actions because it doesn’t even compare to the level of terrorism conducted by the USA back then, and now, and what's to come, THERE WILL NEVER BE A BIGGER TERRORIST THAT THE USA and those who don’t see that are already dead.

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