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Array ( [sid] => 46075 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Feelings Part 2 [time] => 2004-05-03 21:02:16 [hometext] => this is part 2 to the poem 'My Feelings', same applies to this as the first...comments welcomed [bodytext] => why am i always running,
why am i always saying give things a second chance,
why do you keep rabbiting on about the bloody past,
well hear me out about me and my past,
i always did the running,
i was always trying to keep things running,
yet things always ended in a fray,
and all you could say,
'well maybe we shouldnt be together',
if you loved me,
why the hell would you say such a thing,
if thats the case why the hell did we begin,
all you do is run away,
from anything that comes your way,
well,
your a coward is all i can say,
you crumble at the slightest hint,
of things not going your way,
if someone hurts you,
you turn and run,
and then pretend your having fun,
your by no means mature,
or as full hardy as you make out,
of this i do not have a doubt,
you always hide behind,
personas in your mind,
but deep down inside,
your just a wimp,
waiting to be found out,
you do not even have a limb,
to stand on when in front of me,
i get through things,
i face them,
maybe you should take a hint from me,

get a life and grow up. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 6 [informant] => lonely_kakashi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
My Feelings Part 2

Contributed by lonely_kakashi on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 09:02:16 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



why am i always running,
why am i always saying give things a second chance,
why do you keep rabbiting on about the bloody past,
well hear me out about me and my past,
i always did the running,
i was always trying to keep things running,
yet things always ended in a fray,
and all you could say,
'well maybe we shouldnt be together',
if you loved me,
why the hell would you say such a thing,
if thats the case why the hell did we begin,
all you do is run away,
from anything that comes your way,
well,
your a coward is all i can say,
you crumble at the slightest hint,
of things not going your way,
if someone hurts you,
you turn and run,
and then pretend your having fun,
your by no means mature,
or as full hardy as you make out,
of this i do not have a doubt,
you always hide behind,
personas in your mind,
but deep down inside,
your just a wimp,
waiting to be found out,
you do not even have a limb,
to stand on when in front of me,
i get through things,
i face them,
maybe you should take a hint from me,

get a life and grow up.




Copyright © lonely_kakashi ... [ 2004-05-03 21:02:16]
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Re: My Feelings Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:01:51 AM AEST
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Are you done yet, or is there a part 3 to this tirade?


Re: My Feelings Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by Lost_Shadow on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 06:32:18 AM AEST
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This is more powerful than the first one, if you do do a 3rd one make it more powerful. The hurt is feeding me


Re: My Feelings Part 2 (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 02:29:58 AM AEST
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well you think you know me so well why dont you take the hint and stay the hell out of my life like i asked you to. yes i may run but i dont want to be with you so why the hell do you think i run away from you so much!!!!!!!!!!




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