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that tiny hole

Contributed by Cancer on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:43:48 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



watch
it's going black
everything will shrink down
and fit inside that tiny hole
we'll all watch as it burns white
but, slowly, it will fade

it always fades
away

inside
it feels like burning
feels like falling
feels like something
I’ve never felt before

it feels like this won't go on
much longer

that tiny hole has faded
and we're all dead
white
in a world of ashes

and, oh god
sometimes I can almost see the way it was before
but it's never really there
just a lie that I remember
once felt true to me




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2004-05-03 20:43:48]
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Re: that tiny hole (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 02:34:37 PM AEST
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Well done, Cancer. I really enjoyed these lyrics. :) Great write.

Lindsey


Re: that tiny hole (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 02:06:24 AM AEST
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Ambient noise tracks? Do clue me in! This tasted like Reznor or Cobain, refreshing! good work!




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