|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Falling From Grace
Contributed by
merry
on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:24:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
____________________
Falling in love without hesitation
It’s always a mistake
Should have known better
I knew when I saw you I must look away
But then your eyes caught mine
I lost my breath
Falling in love – like falling through space
The rush is too tempting
I could not resist
I gave and you a took
Then we changed places
That surprised me a bit
I thought you might take all you could get
There’s still a wondrous boy inside you
But time is no friend to wondrous boys
And women grow old by the end of the day
Falling from grace is a hard thing to do
You go off to slay dragons
And I stay in this place
So still and so empty
Roaming the halls
Listening for laughter
Familiar footfalls
You’ll not return here
I know it is done
Falling from grace
My pride is sore bruised
I thought I could hold you
But that was a ruse
©gmm2002
Copyright ©
merry
... [
2004-05-03 20:24:40]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Falling From Grace
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:40:21 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
(((Gaille))) this is so damn sad girl. I cant imagine you falling from anyones grace, but then again, you are my wild daisy ;o)
hugs and roses
Larry |
|
|
Re: Falling From Grace
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:43:07 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
ohhh gaille, this is so sad, my heart goes out to you in this deeply felt bittersweet poem, the ending was so strong too, i love your poetry, it is always so earthy and real, but again, this one touched my heart, huggies n' love nessa
@->>->- |
|
|
Re: Falling From Grace
(User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 07:04:20 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very sad and somewhat bitter a realistic poem well written.
top marks
bernard |
|
|
Re: Falling From Grace
(User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:51:01 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
There’s still a wondrous boy inside you
But time is no friend to wondrous boys
And women grow old by the end of the day
These are my favorite lines. What a wonderful way to convey these feelings. It's all good though.
Stitch |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
