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Clouded
Contributed by
reprobate
on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 07:12:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Can you see me
With your eyes so blind
Can you feel me
With that heart so cold
I AM right in front of you
With my dreams so empty
I am here without you
With wretched tears so old
A vision forever etched
With the shadows of We
Can you see me
Copyright ©
reprobate
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2004-05-03 19:12:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Clouded
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 07:28:15 PM AEST (User
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Isn't it odd how after so much emotion between two people and life shared that suddenly you just become invisble to them. You just no longer exist in their world. Seemed very strange to me.
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Re: Clouded
(User Rating: 1 ) by harshreality on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 09:04:18 PM AEST (User
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I completely understand. Life can be so contradicting. Don't you just hate that unfamiliar feeling you get when you realize things have changed? I really liked this. |
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