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Please me Backwards
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:32:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Now you see me,
now I don't
now how I won't
stay alive for you.
Through teary eyes
so bleary, I
decompose inside my head,
inside my head, now
come in from within
it's too cold in my heart
(now rub your eyes)
...your legs...
(this poem sucks)
open up, I'll dissapear.
...please me backwards...
***** dedrater uoy flesruoy llik og
uoy tnaw ***** t'nseod dlrow eht
...come in from within...
...it's too cold in my heart...
and
slink
slink
slink
i slip away, you never see...
[ this poem sucks ]
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SensitiveSoAbused
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2004-05-03 18:32:19]
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Re: Please me Backwards
(User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:06:17 PM AEST
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this poem couldn't suck if it tried.. it's absolutely amazing.. i love how you weave the use of italics and brackets together.. beautiful.. i have an addiction to your poetry lol..
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: Please me Backwards
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 10:57:28 AM AEST
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| i have to agree. this doesnt suck. i dont think its as good as some of your other writes, but its still brilliant. i love the way you describe things... good write. phil x |
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