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Array ( [sid] => 46040 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What is Wrong? [time] => 2004-05-03 17:40:45 [hometext] => I WROTE THIS ON MY BIRTHDAY AFTER MY PARENTS STARTED YELLING AT ME WITH NO EXPLANATION. SO THAT IS WHY IT KIND OF HAS NO REASON OR RHYME. [bodytext] => Door splinters as you charge in
Like a bull, fuming; I am the matador,
Guilty in red. If this a dream, more
Like a nightmare, please let me wake.
Threats spill from your mouth
As my heart crumbles. Later,
Out of anger, the oak tree looks
Challenging for a good fight.
After pouting in defeat, blood as
Black as your temper dripping off
My fingertips onto the cement,
I lean on the hard pillar. Below,
A six-gallon gas tank, tempting me
Like a fat kid and chocolate.
But before anything burns, the wind
Of my own love overwhelms me,
And my chin drops in shame.

-The Raven [comments] => 2 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 32 [informant] => TheRaven [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

What is Wrong?

Contributed by TheRaven on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 05:40:45 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Door splinters as you charge in
Like a bull, fuming; I am the matador,
Guilty in red. If this a dream, more
Like a nightmare, please let me wake.
Threats spill from your mouth
As my heart crumbles. Later,
Out of anger, the oak tree looks
Challenging for a good fight.
After pouting in defeat, blood as
Black as your temper dripping off
My fingertips onto the cement,
I lean on the hard pillar. Below,
A six-gallon gas tank, tempting me
Like a fat kid and chocolate.
But before anything burns, the wind
Of my own love overwhelms me,
And my chin drops in shame.

-The Raven

Copyright © TheRaven ... [ 2004-05-03 17:40:45]
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Re: What is Wrong? (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 05:49:03 PM AEST
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Woah! Just woah. I am very impressed and that is an understatement.
Stitch

Re: What is Wrong? (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 08:22:53 PM AEST
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i agree with stitch, woah! i am very impressed also.
this was just amazing!
loved it.
keep it up.
Arden

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