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Array ( [sid] => 46004 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Pain Of You [time] => 2004-05-03 12:59:30 [hometext] => just kinda blerted this one with no real thinking, comments welcomed [bodytext] => all you do i make me cry,
painting pictures with your lies,
you've broken my heart so many times,
why do i keep coming back that one last time,
tell me this i have to know,
so that i dont do it again,
you say you love me,
but you always end up hurting me,
why cant you just give things a second go,
why am i the only one who doesnt get a second chance,
why am i damned forever for that one mistake,
look it could get you straight,
'cause i dont want to hate,
i've just had enough,
why dont you just grow up,
you say you are,
but i think you not,
you are just that little child,
hiding behind your fears,
why dont you just pluck up your ears,
listen to what i have to say,
take it in and and let me sway,
your opinion on this subject,
where is your open mindedness,
why are you such a pain in the arse,
why are you being so stubborn,
why cant i get a second chance. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 22 [informant] => lonely_kakashi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The Pain Of You

Contributed by lonely_kakashi on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 12:59:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

all you do i make me cry,
painting pictures with your lies,
you've broken my heart so many times,
why do i keep coming back that one last time,
tell me this i have to know,
so that i dont do it again,
you say you love me,
but you always end up hurting me,
why cant you just give things a second go,
why am i the only one who doesnt get a second chance,
why am i damned forever for that one mistake,
look it could get you straight,
'cause i dont want to hate,
i've just had enough,
why dont you just grow up,
you say you are,
but i think you not,
you are just that little child,
hiding behind your fears,
why dont you just pluck up your ears,
listen to what i have to say,
take it in and and let me sway,
your opinion on this subject,
where is your open mindedness,
why are you such a pain in the arse,
why are you being so stubborn,
why cant i get a second chance.

Copyright © lonely_kakashi ... [ 2004-05-03 12:59:30]
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Re: The Pain Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 01:13:27 PM AEST
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Very nice blurt.
I enjoyed it.

Re: The Pain Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 01:20:30 PM AEST
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painful.. but very good.. can totally relate..
charlotte x_x_x

Re: The Pain Of You (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 02:33:30 AM AEST
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Thats just me and always has been!! so get the **** over it

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