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Array ( [sid] => 45990 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Violated Trust [time] => 2004-05-03 11:00:43 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Another time, another fight
Another time things won't be right
You brought back habits, so did I
I know I can't stop this time
Sixty five cuts are now new
And I know the pain it'll cause you
But your pain is nothing compared to mine
As we walk firmly on this broken line
My pain comes from you and all your lies
Your broken promises, the times I've cried
Anger is back and won't go away
And I kill myself again this day
Just to burry the pain a little further down
To make you believe we're on solid ground
I don't tell you the problems and you wonder why
I know all it'll lead to is another lie
You say your friends aren't more important than me
You say I'm closed minded but you can't see
Because if you did I wouldn't hurt
Feeling of loneliness wouldn't still lerk
Feelings of hate, rage, and fear
Your apologies are really never sincere
You break your promises and then get mad
For me doing the same things you have
And I was wrong to open up
Because it was you who violated the trust. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 371 [topic] => 6 [informant] => CuttersAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Violated Trust

Contributed by CuttersAngel on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 11:00:43 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Another time, another fight
Another time things won't be right
You brought back habits, so did I
I know I can't stop this time
Sixty five cuts are now new
And I know the pain it'll cause you
But your pain is nothing compared to mine
As we walk firmly on this broken line
My pain comes from you and all your lies
Your broken promises, the times I've cried
Anger is back and won't go away
And I kill myself again this day
Just to burry the pain a little further down
To make you believe we're on solid ground
I don't tell you the problems and you wonder why
I know all it'll lead to is another lie
You say your friends aren't more important than me
You say I'm closed minded but you can't see
Because if you did I wouldn't hurt
Feeling of loneliness wouldn't still lerk
Feelings of hate, rage, and fear
Your apologies are really never sincere
You break your promises and then get mad
For me doing the same things you have
And I was wrong to open up
Because it was you who violated the trust.

Copyright © CuttersAngel ... [ 2004-05-03 11:00:43]
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Re: Violated Trust (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 11:28:51 AM AEST
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This was a very powerful well written poem.
I enjoyed it greatly.

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