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Array ( [sid] => 4597 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Not worth it [time] => 2002-10-04 10:45:00 [hometext] => This is a poem i wrote to my ex gf and my best friend. If you have any comments at all make them plz.....i need to know someone read this. [bodytext] => You dumped me because of the depresion inside
You saw all, I tried to hide
The way weve ended up, causes so much pain
Its hard to cope with, hard to explain
All the pain youve fed, from all of the deception
The life i knew, changes the life thats real, from within
you said you missed me
a moment later you were without me
i had no clue why youd do such a thing
leaving my friend gloating
of how hes with the one i love, tears ran down my face
When i did nothing more, than put him in his place
he got ticked, thought a second
his inner hatred, sent out a becond
he used force, his movement a blur
remembering that day, brings back so much anger
cause it showed me, with good reason, why
i have allways felt, like ive wanted to die
ive never had, such a thing as a friend
ive never been able, to stand up and defend
im what most would call worthless
the joys in my life, not worth this
but i cant stand up, and help myself
ill jast lay here, crying, waiting for help [comments] => 3 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 6 [informant] => tweaks2004 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Not worth it

Contributed by tweaks2004 on Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



You dumped me because of the depresion inside
You saw all, I tried to hide
The way weve ended up, causes so much pain
Its hard to cope with, hard to explain
All the pain youve fed, from all of the deception
The life i knew, changes the life thats real, from within
you said you missed me
a moment later you were without me
i had no clue why youd do such a thing
leaving my friend gloating
of how hes with the one i love, tears ran down my face
When i did nothing more, than put him in his place
he got ticked, thought a second
his inner hatred, sent out a becond
he used force, his movement a blur
remembering that day, brings back so much anger
cause it showed me, with good reason, why
i have allways felt, like ive wanted to die
ive never had, such a thing as a friend
ive never been able, to stand up and defend
im what most would call worthless
the joys in my life, not worth this
but i cant stand up, and help myself
ill jast lay here, crying, waiting for help




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Re: Not worth it (User Rating: 1 )
by LJ on Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 03:23:10 PM AEST
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This is so sad. I am so sorry. There are other people out there and there are true friends. I hope you find yours!


Re: Not worth it (User Rating: 1 )
by MisterRight on Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 03:26:27 AM AEST
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He was never a friend in the first place if he could do that. It's unforunate the way you found this out, but at least you did find out. Just remember you're never alone, no matter how much it may seem like you are. There is always someone there, maybe you just don't see them.

Great write, lots of emotion.

Curtis


Re: Not worth it (User Rating: 1 )
by aubz_09 on Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 02:04:26 PM AEST
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Freakin good, Brian! you rock my world. sorry about what happened




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