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Array ( [sid] => 45967 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't [time] => 2004-05-03 06:46:29 [hometext] => An angry song about one I love [bodytext] => Late I was awake
I was alone
she walked away

wait till I get dressed
and we'll fly awhile
winged birds them dancing

don't say she's in my head
when she's not
I am insulted

don't tell me not to stop
not to stall
on your doorstep

don't ask me how I feel
how to walk
on your heal

don't beg me not to stay
don't crawl
don't even squeal

there is bleeding in my heart
but theres none
thats on the surface

don't tell me not to scream
cuz I just might
anyway

don't look while I'm lurking
cuz my own
is my own I own

don't you have to be
in a war
out at sea

there are demons in my head
and there's some
want me dead

caves are all around
but I can't hide
I'm in the open

don't make me understand
make out to be
make me who I am [comments] => 2 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 34 [informant] => loyalist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Don't

Contributed by loyalist on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 06:46:29 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Late I was awake
I was alone
she walked away

wait till I get dressed
and we'll fly awhile
winged birds them dancing

don't say she's in my head
when she's not
I am insulted

don't tell me not to stop
not to stall
on your doorstep

don't ask me how I feel
how to walk
on your heal

don't beg me not to stay
don't crawl
don't even squeal

there is bleeding in my heart
but theres none
thats on the surface

don't tell me not to scream
cuz I just might
anyway

don't look while I'm lurking
cuz my own
is my own I own

don't you have to be
in a war
out at sea

there are demons in my head
and there's some
want me dead

caves are all around
but I can't hide
I'm in the open

don't make me understand
make out to be
make me who I am

Copyright © loyalist ... [ 2004-05-03 06:46:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Don't (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:13:16 AM AEST
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This has a really good form, and it would definalty make an excellent song. The anger is very subtle yet hypocritically visible, and thats a really good trait to have in any anger poem. I didnt like some of the wording and flow in this but thats just personal opinion, 4/5

Re: Don't (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 05:29:37 AM AEST
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Aww..its a good lyric..a heart felt write..beautifully touching. venkat

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