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anything of my pain
they say they understand
but have never felt the same.

I feel so alone
in this wretched place
everyone thinks i'm okay
because of the smile on my face.

No one knows
if they just look at me
pain, dissappointment, & hate
is what they'd see.

No one knows
no one takes the time
to see how badly
I just want to die.

I badly need someone
to just be here
I look around desperatley
but no one is ever there.

No one knows
how much I cry
no one see's it
they think i'm just fine.

No one knows
they can't see my tears
and no one knowing
is my biggest fear. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 32 [informant] => EvaRee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

No One Knows

Contributed by EvaRee on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:05:39 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

No one knows
anything of my pain
they say they understand
but have never felt the same.

I feel so alone
in this wretched place
everyone thinks i'm okay
because of the smile on my face.

No one knows
if they just look at me
pain, dissappointment, & hate
is what they'd see.

No one knows
no one takes the time
to see how badly
I just want to die.

I badly need someone
to just be here
I look around desperatley
but no one is ever there.

No one knows
how much I cry
no one see's it
they think i'm just fine.

No one knows
they can't see my tears
and no one knowing
is my biggest fear.

Copyright © EvaRee ... [ 2004-05-02 17:05:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: No One Knows (User Rating: 1 )
by diamond_tears on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:51:55 PM AEST
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wow... this is EXACTLY how I have felt!!!

Well done love this poem!!

take care PM me whenever i will give u support. lots of love jo xxxxx

Re: No One Knows (User Rating: 1 )
by lonely_kakashi on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:52:04 PM AEST
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Everyone at one time or another goes through something similar to this, as an example i got cuts on my wrist that most people dont know about (until now :-) ) i wouldn't get too worried about the fact you are hiding things, i know i do and i know other people do, Anyway...

Good poem, great flow, good ryhming,

Oh if you wanna talk PM me :)

:D
Kakashi

Re: No One Knows (User Rating: 1 )
by xoblondiebabix3 on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 09:37:48 PM AEST
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wow.. this poem is extremely awesome.. wow.. this is exactly everything i've ever been feeling.. its like all my poems put together.. This is so good. I loved how you put it
Awesome job!
~*xObeaOx*~

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