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Array ( [sid] => 45848 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicide aint the answer, Revenge is... [time] => 2004-05-02 10:27:51 [hometext] => A few words from the heart.... [bodytext] => Here I am,
In a world not my own,
Created by someone of the unknown,
A world so scattered that it hurts to live in,
You cut urself and see your blood covering the walls,
You hold back your tears intill they turn to ice,
And watch as you get infested with lice,
Everyday you wish you could just come to the point and kill yourself,
But instead you live with all the pain thats gathered up inside and you slit your wrists and smile when you see the site of your own blood pouring out.
And then you began cursing and spitting,
Blaming that stupid ***** for ***** your life up,
And making you feel this way,
That stupid ***** When I see him ill burying him in my front lawn well he's still breathing,
As I throw the dirt back over I see his face,
The exact same face I had when he was doing that stupid ***** he should of never did,
Now its your turn jack@ss I hope you rot in hell.... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Twisted_Babi_Angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Suicide aint the answer, Revenge is...

Contributed by Twisted_Babi_Angel on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 10:27:51 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Here I am,
In a world not my own,
Created by someone of the unknown,
A world so scattered that it hurts to live in,
You cut urself and see your blood covering the walls,
You hold back your tears intill they turn to ice,
And watch as you get infested with lice,
Everyday you wish you could just come to the point and kill yourself,
But instead you live with all the pain thats gathered up inside and you slit your wrists and smile when you see the site of your own blood pouring out.
And then you began cursing and spitting,
Blaming that stupid ***** for ***** your life up,
And making you feel this way,
That stupid ***** When I see him ill burying him in my front lawn well he's still breathing,
As I throw the dirt back over I see his face,
The exact same face I had when he was doing that stupid ***** he should of never did,
Now its your turn jack@ss I hope you rot in hell....

Copyright © Twisted_Babi_Angel ... [ 2004-05-02 10:27:51]
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Re: Suicide aint the answer, Revenge is... (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:19:47 AM AEST
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Nevermind

Re: Suicide aint the answer, Revenge is... (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 01:23:50 PM AEST
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Now I can send you a response because you're listening. I get this mad sometimes too, yet it is destructive to feel this way. I know I might not have any business making comments like this: forgiveness has helped me solve some of my greatest problems it doesn't happen easily for anyone and trust me it is very hard to do. It always seems at the start that tying my enemies up in a car and pushing it off a high bridge is easier until later when we're out having a great time together. Thought I'd let you know.

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