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Array ( [sid] => 45827 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How Right You Are [time] => 2004-05-02 05:06:39 [hometext] => An apology for making someone doubt something they know is correct [bodytext] => When you tell me you feel something is wrong,
You don''t know how right you are.

Because i broadside your questions to me,
Till, you don''t know how right you are.

I have hid and blocked your every inclination of doubt,
To keep you from knowing how right you are.

The scar is now so deep and warm with blood in the form of truth,
But it''s held back from bleeding by a stitch of shame,
For i know how right you are.

My eyes, so impressed you with comfort,
All the while they held the secret of knowing that you''re right,
And i know you are.

Makes me sick in self rage,
Mixed with pride and the inner demons of pestulance,
And the belief i made you doubt how right you are.

If this was or is my confession,
You''ve been given an answer to all the questions that you have asked,
That i have made your mind shun the light that has a truthful sheen,
That all I ever wanted was to give you the information that you have requested,
In fact, i told you i would be so different from pain and disappointment,
That you would for once in your life be free in love,
And experience this love, pure in exsistance and free from the past,
A past of questions and no answers,
But the fact remains, i am swollen in tears,
Which has filled my soul to overflowing proportions,
I should make your righteous mind be free,
But i don''t know why i am, the way i am,
Because I know, you know, but i have made you doubt what you know,
So you don''t know,
Just how right you are.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 50 [informant] => Loyalist [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

How Right You Are

Contributed by Loyalist on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:06:39 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

When you tell me you feel something is wrong,
You don''t know how right you are.

Because i broadside your questions to me,
Till, you don''t know how right you are.

I have hid and blocked your every inclination of doubt,
To keep you from knowing how right you are.

The scar is now so deep and warm with blood in the form of truth,
But it''s held back from bleeding by a stitch of shame,
For i know how right you are.

My eyes, so impressed you with comfort,
All the while they held the secret of knowing that you''re right,
And i know you are.

Makes me sick in self rage,
Mixed with pride and the inner demons of pestulance,
And the belief i made you doubt how right you are.

If this was or is my confession,
You''ve been given an answer to all the questions that you have asked,
That i have made your mind shun the light that has a truthful sheen,
That all I ever wanted was to give you the information that you have requested,
In fact, i told you i would be so different from pain and disappointment,
That you would for once in your life be free in love,
And experience this love, pure in exsistance and free from the past,
A past of questions and no answers,
But the fact remains, i am swollen in tears,
Which has filled my soul to overflowing proportions,
I should make your righteous mind be free,
But i don''t know why i am, the way i am,
Because I know, you know, but i have made you doubt what you know,
So you don''t know,
Just how right you are.

Copyright © Loyalist ... [ 2004-05-02 05:06:39]
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Re: How Right You Are (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 05:15:40 AM AEST
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Very interesting write.
shows the power of the pen.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: How Right You Are (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 04:24:13 AM AEST
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I thought the last part should have been segmented like the first half, as it read like a footnote or something.

Just an opinion. Hope the person in question read and appreciated it.

Keep writing.

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