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Array ( [sid] => 45791 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Don't Hold You Responsible [time] => 2004-05-01 20:36:27 [hometext] => same old same old but only a better word choice and I put my whole heart into it [bodytext] => Slowly blowing past me
The wind carries
another wasted minute
I don't want to look
inside my heart right now
And trouble what's in it
Know already
another dream
Will go back where it belongs
Turn away from reality
And become an inspiration
for yet more poems or some songs
On the verge of crying
Tears form, but do not become
So typical of me
Another item on my list
to finish things I have begun
Walking in a circle
Never dare cross the finish line
I'm quite experienced now
At convincing myself I will be fine
How strong you are
Depends on what meaning you give to a break
A time to change ones mine
Or a second in which my heart you take
I have nothing to say
You have made your decision
Unbearble pain
For a long time to stay
was not in my vision
But I don't hold you responsible
After all I have never
Told you I loved you,
so let it rain,
For my mood fits the weather [comments] => 1 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 22 [informant] => New_York_Chick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I Don't Hold You Responsible

Contributed by New_York_Chick on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:36:27 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Slowly blowing past me
The wind carries
another wasted minute
I don't want to look
inside my heart right now
And trouble what's in it
Know already
another dream
Will go back where it belongs
Turn away from reality
And become an inspiration
for yet more poems or some songs
On the verge of crying
Tears form, but do not become
So typical of me
Another item on my list
to finish things I have begun
Walking in a circle
Never dare cross the finish line
I'm quite experienced now
At convincing myself I will be fine
How strong you are
Depends on what meaning you give to a break
A time to change ones mine
Or a second in which my heart you take
I have nothing to say
You have made your decision
Unbearble pain
For a long time to stay
was not in my vision
But I don't hold you responsible
After all I have never
Told you I loved you,
so let it rain,
For my mood fits the weather

Copyright © New_York_Chick ... [ 2004-05-01 20:36:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Don't Hold You Responsible (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 09:13:20 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
Great job.
luv, huggs,
emy

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