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No Visible Scars
Contributed by
HOPE4ME2
on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 07:30:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The pain I wear deep inside,
Where she plays, where she hides.
Marks left behind by time.
Emotions trapped by a thin fine line.
No visible scars...
Hidden tears go unseen.
Silent sobs to my dismay.
Building pressure, fleeing not.
Within my heart a hard tied knot.
No visible scars...
Life's waves crash against my Soul.
Trapping me deep inside.
There at last numbness my victor.
No visible scars...
All that feels one cannot see.
Searching inside wanting to be free.
Scars of yesteryear have left their mark.
Removing the light, replacing with dark.
No visible scars...
But, are they?
Copyright ©
HOPE4ME2
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2004-05-01 19:30:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: No Visible Scars
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 07:37:30 PM AEST (User
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this is so vivid and moving, it really touched me:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: No Visible Scars
(User Rating: 1 ) by a_bear on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:34:46 PM AEST (User
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I loved it...the rhyming, everything. A+ |
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Re: No Visible Scars
(User Rating: 1 ) by weswind on
Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 11:15:17 PM AEST (User
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this is really awesome keep up the great writing |
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Re: No Visible Scars
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 20th August 2005 @ 12:13:55 AM AEST (User
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Well done... another great work.
Take care.
David |
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