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Array ( [sid] => 45731 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => down the hole...2nd reel [time] => 2004-05-01 12:33:49 [hometext] => this thing may go on forever..or until i'm barred by true poetry lovers [bodytext] => down the hole you go
old boy
down the hole you go..!
your life as its user
has come to its end..
down the hole you go..!

life is a brat
and often a bust..

(down the hole you go!)

but we're stuck with its lot
and live it we must..

(down the hole you go!)

we'll lay you right out
'neath the cool summer grass..

(down the hole you go!)

i'll sit by your headstone
now you kiss my ***..

(down the hole you go!)

i've often wondered
what life's all about..

(down the hole you go!)

first you're put in
and then taken out..

(down the hole you go!)

you go ahead
i'll be along..

(down the hole you go!)

and together forever
we'll belt out this song..

(down the hole you go!) [comments] => 4 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 43 [informant] => bj [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

down the hole...2nd reel

Contributed by bj on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 12:33:49 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

down the hole you go
old boy
down the hole you go..!
your life as its user
has come to its end..
down the hole you go..!

life is a brat
and often a bust..

(down the hole you go!)

but we're stuck with its lot
and live it we must..

(down the hole you go!)

we'll lay you right out
'neath the cool summer grass..

(down the hole you go!)

i'll sit by your headstone
now you kiss my ***..

(down the hole you go!)

i've often wondered
what life's all about..

(down the hole you go!)

first you're put in
and then taken out..

(down the hole you go!)

you go ahead
i'll be along..

(down the hole you go!)

and together forever
we'll belt out this song..

(down the hole you go!)

Copyright © bj ... [ 2004-05-01 12:33:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: down the hole...2nd reel (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 12:45:15 PM AEST
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I love the way you put these rhymes together and yes down the hole. It is waiting for all of us eventually. see you there with a bit of luck

bernard.

Re: down the hole...2nd reel (User Rating: 1 )
by ksprincess42004 on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 12:45:33 PM AEST
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This poem was interesting to say the least. There is no right or wrong way to write poetry, it is an expression of oneself. Good job!

Re: down the hole...2nd reel (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Wednesday, 26th May 2004 @ 02:03:20 AM AEST
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while i'm not a singer(unless you call the noises from the bottom of a volcano, singing), i'll certainly try.
nice piece, thanks for sharing

Re: down the hole...2nd reel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 06:56:22 PM AEST
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Enjoy the now, for tomorrow is not promised, nor certain, and it could be " down the hole you go."

Very nice write.. Raquel Leah

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