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[aid] => mick
[title] => It's Traffic Jam, Can SHE Hear My Whisper?
[time] => 2004-04-30 20:09:39
[hometext] => It's a masterpiece, Enjoy reading it.... comments will be very appreciated...
[bodytext] => It seems that fate played the same dirty game with my poor heart again… Suddenly without any reasons And I have nothing to do with it. Just surrendering Hoping peace and freedom for my broken wounded heart… But, I'm still wondering, still asking 'why?!' 'Why me?!' 'Why, She?! When it's about 'She' So u shot me in a deadly area How clever are u fate?! You fed me anger and drank me the bitterness hate… How clever you are to play your dirty twisted tricks using 'She' my Point of weakness… And I'm still wondering, still asking 'why?!' Why did 'she' ignite the fuse?! Doesn't she know how badly it hurts and how much I may lose?! Oh God, I can't take more of this abuse… Doesn't she know how long it takes to have my heart ready for sucking rays of love once again?! Doesn't she know how long it takes to wash away the dust over many years of hurts and pain?! Over that frightened heart or over what still remains?! Killing such a real deep innocent feeling never been easy as the way she thought Burring such a cute whipping new born and taking away it’s life never been easy while it’s pitilessly rising it’s hand asking for survive Even if I could do that, How long it will take to have another newborn? How long it will take to have another real feeling? Pulled out from all of those poisoned thorns… Giving that immortal promise, being serious about this word of the longest four letters It’s the hardest decision I might think about Or say it out loud, screaming it and shout it out… I wish you are real, I wish you are the one I always dreamed of, the only love the one I adore The one whom my soul left my body searching for Careless of getting lost Ready for spending itself just for me and preparing for more… It's not the same like anytime before I swear I feel you so deep, That's why I'm blaming my self on selling my heart many times in the past with a price that sounds very cheap.. I pity on my self Oh I became so tired I’m asking the mercy for a heart full of crawl stabs Before I stop it my self and getting it fired Now I became so complicated, And you are my only hope My last breath to break this painful spell that my miserable life created.. Only you where able to suck the death of me Bringing me another shining life, Only you were able to squeeze the life out of me Giving me the hands of help appealing me to survive. I won’t be that afraid anymore I won't hide behind close doors Even if those words were the lasts before my soul leave and soar… I let my feeling explode like a rebel volcano I left the words ran out of it's jail And I'm alone worried and waiting Dreaming of your kind reply and with the place we will sail… All I need to fix my bleeding core All I dream of as a cure Is hugging you deep Yea just hugging u deep Cause only that is able to extent the volcano of my firing feelings forever… Making my tears of joy burst like a crazy river… I will never give up I'll do my best and I'll struggle just to be into your kind cuddle… That Feeling takes me so high, so far and makes me feel rest your pretty face, Your warm embrace appeal me to wash away the tantalizing pain over my poor chest… You filled me with hope You gave me many signs, you make so sure You turned me to someone else that is better much more You really changed me Like the fire turn the ore… You really made me happy for awhile you gave me the courage to speak with no fear you make me from joy speaking to the atmosphere… “Don't use drugs, get high on hugs” Those words you always advised me with, Didn’t you? They ran to my ears like happy kids carrying their toys with faces full of joy I still hear those words repeating in my ears Then silence took apart, Darkness, bleeding and screaming starts In a part of a second, In front of my eyes A long tape of a rosy dream, of a shining future was completely burning And all is left were ashes of suffering and pain And a sporadic sound of my shrinking fast-beating heart that you drove insane… You were so close like no one ever reached, You could've been number one, When it's the end of the numbers. You could've ruled my whole world, If only you gave me the chance You could've been my ever-lasting love, You could've been my angel that God blessed me with from above… If only you gave me the chance, opening your heart for me just for once… To teach you a word that for you it might be ordinary or maybe it’s out of your dictionary A word calls “Romance” I know that you are not happy for mentioning you here But you know what you’ve done and you are not satisfied And I’m sure that now you are fighting your fear Cause every time I look into your eyes Makes me sure it's real I know you are trying to hide it Trying to but that cold mask Trying to freeze what you feel With stony sharp words You tried to wonder my ears But after you read what I wrote for you here It’s very obvious I can see it so clear You don’t have to say that you loved me Cause I can taste it in your tears Now you are very far away from me Having fun somewhere Living your frozen life, Giving the damn about anyone whom tries to care And here I’m alone walking away Lost and torn have no hope to stay Running so mad into the road of nowhere… Oh God, that's not fair… Maybe someday you remember me maybe today, maybe tomorrow or after a year you might consider me as a bad memory Or maybe you cry on losing me whispering “Oh Dear” But for me life's counter stopped till I open my eyes once again finding you near… And till that day come I'll keep praying and asking for fair Willing God to make you the one whom I'll forever will share… Finally I won't say goodbye Cause I'll always live on a hope of having a real chance between you and I [comments] => 7 [counter] => 584 [topic] => 22 [informant] => OMEGA_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 8 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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