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I must be dreaming
Please someone help me
All I could rember is my mom screaming
How come I can't move or talk
Please someone help
I didn't realy mean to do it I didn't realy mean to kill my self
I was just so fed up with it all
So I took some pills a friend gave me he said it would help
When I took them I got realy sleepy and went to bed
Please someone help me
Someone's coming please help
It's my dad he's putting me in a coffin No please
I can't be dead
There caring me to my grave how come my tombstone says forever sleeping Please someone help me I can't be dead I only took 2 pills
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Please someone help me

Contributed by deepdarkthinker on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:45:24 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

This can't be happing
I must be dreaming
Please someone help me
All I could rember is my mom screaming
How come I can't move or talk
Please someone help
I didn't realy mean to do it I didn't realy mean to kill my self
I was just so fed up with it all
So I took some pills a friend gave me he said it would help
When I took them I got realy sleepy and went to bed
Please someone help me
Someone's coming please help
It's my dad he's putting me in a coffin No please
I can't be dead
There caring me to my grave how come my tombstone says forever sleeping Please someone help me I can't be dead I only took 2 pills
Please someone help me.

Copyright © deepdarkthinker ... [ 2004-04-30 13:45:24]
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Re: Please someone help me (User Rating: 1 )
by Tonilovesadam on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:48:00 PM AEST
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good but totally creepy
this is why you DON'T TAKE PILLS DUH!!!
bye sis

Re: Please someone help me (User Rating: 1 )
by Brians_Sweety on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:51:14 PM AEST
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Hey goof dork. all I got to say is you best be glad this isn't true because if it was then .... well..... I would watch......I WOULD BE ALONE WITH THE GUYS AHHHHHHH That wouldn't be cool lol.

Re: Please someone help me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:54:07 PM AEST
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spooked me dont commit suicide dont take pills life has something to offer each of us we just need to ride out the peaks and valleys and the forlorn sad times and there are many..... if ever you need to talk Im here.

Michelle

Re: Please someone help me (User Rating: 1 )
by ksprincess42004 on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:11:20 PM AEST
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Hope this makes people think before they try to commit suicide. The sad thing is most people don't realize how precious life is until they feel it slipping away. Great job.

Re: Please someone help me (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:36:58 PM AEST
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this twists me because i know someone on drugs. i guess i shouldn't have anything to do with them, but i do. i'm treated like dirt by this person and all i wanna do is help them!!
i guess i should tell, but i can't.

but i'm worrid about my friend!!

Re: Please someone help me (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacquelynne on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:08:58 AM AEST
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i love you sis, this better not happen, you know where I am if you need to talk....

Love you!!!
Jen Ren

Re: Please someone help me (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 08:54:03 PM AEST
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Better a mill stone be tied around his neck.
Thirty pieces of silver;What the heck.
Cold is the stone upon my grave.
I'm burning in hell and it's heaven I crave.
Death in not an end
After life eternity begin
Never be this foolish.
It is sick and goolish.
Sinned

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