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Why wont they come
Closer and closer they appear
But in reality they are so far
My foes mock me
My friends hold me
I just wish they would come
Tears come and set me free
Why wont they come
I have tried but failed
I have bottled up them for so long
I have forgotten how to cry
Please tears come
But not yet
I am drowning
Which way to go
Whirlpool on one side
Sharks on the other
Ahead looks too far
Behind is too painful
January 14th 2000
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Tears

Contributed by lil_angel on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:41:31 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The tears are almost here
Why wont they come
Closer and closer they appear
But in reality they are so far
My foes mock me
My friends hold me
I just wish they would come
Tears come and set me free
Why wont they come
I have tried but failed
I have bottled up them for so long
I have forgotten how to cry
Please tears come
But not yet
I am drowning
Which way to go
Whirlpool on one side
Sharks on the other
Ahead looks too far
Behind is too painful
January 14th 2000

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Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSchroedmeister on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:51:49 PM AEST
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How sad. I hope they came and set you free, ourself is the worst prison.

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:05:10 PM AEST
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Sometimes we can get into such a state of shock that our surroundings and emotions don't seem real. Tears are cleansing crystals to soothe pain.

Your poem touched my heart.

Kie

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by xoblondiebabix3 on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:33:07 PM AEST
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I can relate to this one
a very sad yet wonderful poem
~*xObeaOx*~

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:34:11 PM AEST
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Oh sweetie, how awful. Still no tears huh? Well, when they come I bet it will be a gully washer. Keep us posted on the tear situation.

Rita

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by ksprincess42004 on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:16:13 PM AEST
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I can totally relate to this one. Great job.

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 05:58:01 PM AEST
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Good write lil_angel... I can relate to this.

Re: Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Dawny on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:03:13 AM AEST
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Wow...so much sadness. You really have a way for putting such strong emotion into your poetry. I'm sorry you feel like this, and I hope you can find a release.
Excellent writing as usual

Love Dawny x

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