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Array ( [sid] => 45555 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => unnoticed [time] => 2004-04-30 08:32:47 [hometext] => This is the first successful semi-dark poem i've written..and i think it came out really good..it's very ironic with a twist of things at the end. [bodytext] => I don't think you would notice
you could never tell,
If i took my one last breath
and left it all behind.
Then when it all sets in
and you realize that i'm gone,
denial will overwhelm you
and you'll point blame at someone else.
but one day down the line
when you're feeling so alone,
when you start to feel as i did,
and see what caused my death,
you'll wish i was still here
to wash away your tears,
to clean away the blood that seeps
from your leaking veins
then you'll take your one last breath
and leave it all behind
I'll place a flower on your grave
and laugh at what you've done.
© Ann T.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 277 [topic] => 52 [informant] => purplestary [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

unnoticed

Contributed by purplestary on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 08:32:47 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I don't think you would notice
you could never tell,
If i took my one last breath
and left it all behind.
Then when it all sets in
and you realize that i'm gone,
denial will overwhelm you
and you'll point blame at someone else.
but one day down the line
when you're feeling so alone,
when you start to feel as i did,
and see what caused my death,
you'll wish i was still here
to wash away your tears,
to clean away the blood that seeps
from your leaking veins
then you'll take your one last breath
and leave it all behind
I'll place a flower on your grave
and laugh at what you've done.
© Ann T.

Copyright © purplestary ... [ 2004-04-30 08:32:47]
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Re: unnoticed (User Rating: 1 )
by persia on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 08:38:43 AM AEST
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Diz iz really good u av a gr8 talent!
Keep it up!

Persia

Re: unnoticed (User Rating: 1 )
by TokenBad on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 09:08:32 AM AEST
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Very nice..Keep up the good work

TokenBad

Re: unnoticed (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 08:44:59 AM AEST
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I hope he gets to read this poem if he does then he will be in for a big surprise. You have certainly told him in plain Englsih what you think of him. Five out of five for this very straightforward poem.

bernard.

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