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Array ( [sid] => 45517 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If I could shape the moon [time] => 2004-04-30 00:25:30 [hometext] => The first of many poems I wrote for my wife of 15 yrs. [bodytext] => If I could shape the moon,
I'd take a golden knife.
I'd cut out little pieces,
and shape it like my wife.

I'd have her eyes as stars
and shine them very bright.
So that everyone on earth,
could admire her at night.

I'd take Saturns rings,
add them to her red hair
and then I'd make a wish,
that I could be buried there.

Because she's my inspiration
and she will be to the end.
If not reincarnated as her husband,
I'd want to come back as her friend.

Our life is full of good times,
that we will always share.
I wish us many more,
because thats how much I care.

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 2 [informant] => skinsfan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

If I could shape the moon

Contributed by skinsfan on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:25:30 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

If I could shape the moon,
I'd take a golden knife.
I'd cut out little pieces,
and shape it like my wife.

I'd have her eyes as stars
and shine them very bright.
So that everyone on earth,
could admire her at night.

I'd take Saturns rings,
add them to her red hair
and then I'd make a wish,
that I could be buried there.

Because she's my inspiration
and she will be to the end.
If not reincarnated as her husband,
I'd want to come back as her friend.

Our life is full of good times,
that we will always share.
I wish us many more,
because thats how much I care.

Copyright © skinsfan ... [ 2004-04-30 00:25:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: If I could shape the moon (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:33:53 AM AEST
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Lucky lady she is u not only luv her but ur very talented.
Great write.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: If I could shape the moon (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:01:39 AM AEST
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To be loved that much.....wow! I really liked this poem. Your wife is a very lucky woman! Keep on writing and I'll keep reading. Like your writes so far.
Thumps ; 0 )

Re: If I could shape the moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 01:42:36 AM AEST
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What a lovely caring tribute to the woman you love. Wishing you many more years of happiness together.

Rita

Re: If I could shape the moon (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 03:43:19 AM AEST
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so romantic
michelle

Re: If I could shape the moon (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:52:16 PM AEST
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That was beautiful, fantastic title too!

wildejohnny.

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