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Array ( [sid] => 45488 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => leave me alone to be me [time] => 2004-04-29 22:22:47 [hometext] => feedback appreciated [bodytext] => you say im worthwhile
that im not a loss
i dont believe you
you're not my boss

you cant control me
you're not my mom
you cant tell me
what i am or where im from

i live my life
the way i feel
i dont tend to please
or run in the same wheel

cuz that what y'all do
you run with the rest
i do what i want
i do what i feel is best

so dont try and tell me
whats right or wrong
dont tell my how you feel
or how i dont belong

im tired of hearing
how crazy i am
how bad i could be
how sad i am

i dont care how your doing
or how your dog threw up
i dont care how boring your mom is
or how you just ran over a pup

i have enough to worry about
just being me
i dont need your life story
just let me be [comments] => 4 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 6 [informant] => superash16 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

leave me alone to be me

Contributed by superash16 on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:22:47 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

you say im worthwhile
that im not a loss
i dont believe you
you're not my boss

you cant control me
you're not my mom
you cant tell me
what i am or where im from

i live my life
the way i feel
i dont tend to please
or run in the same wheel

cuz that what y'all do
you run with the rest
i do what i want
i do what i feel is best

so dont try and tell me
whats right or wrong
dont tell my how you feel
or how i dont belong

im tired of hearing
how crazy i am
how bad i could be
how sad i am

i dont care how your doing
or how your dog threw up
i dont care how boring your mom is
or how you just ran over a pup

i have enough to worry about
just being me
i dont need your life story
just let me be

Copyright © superash16 ... [ 2004-04-29 22:22:47]
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Re: leave me alone to be me (User Rating: 1 )
by Remi on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:36:40 PM AEST
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u tell them boy !!! but series good write I really like it

remi

Re: leave me alone to be me (User Rating: 1 )
by SuperAsh16 on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:57:52 PM AEST
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im a girl but its all good

Re: leave me alone to be me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:47:07 PM AEST
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You've captured your feelings well.
Never compermize who u r.
U did a gret job with this.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: leave me alone to be me (User Rating: 1 )
by blackmarker on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 02:16:31 PM AEST
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Well done, very nicely written, you get a point across quite well. I agree, I feel like that sometimes.. Great job!

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