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Do you wonder?
Do you ponder or consider,
When you look into the eyes of a brother or a sister?
Do their eyes draw to your soul?
Do you see their dreams or goals,
all the pain that's in their lives,
their happy and sad times?
Or do you look then turn away,
cause you do not want to face
what's inside those piercing spheres,
that removes your heart's facade
to reveal what's in your heart

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A look inside the man

Contributed by Archie on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 07:54:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Do you marvel?
Do you wonder?
Do you ponder or consider,
When you look into the eyes of a brother or a sister?
Do their eyes draw to your soul?
Do you see their dreams or goals,
all the pain that's in their lives,
their happy and sad times?
Or do you look then turn away,
cause you do not want to face
what's inside those piercing spheres,
that removes your heart's facade
to reveal what's in your heart

Written 1/3/99

Copyright © Archie ... [ 2004-04-29 19:54:59]
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Re: A look inside the man (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:23:50 PM AEST
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A thought provoking poem.
Yes I see many things when I look into someones eyes.

I really liked this one...

Kie

Re: A look inside the man (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 08:14:04 AM AEST
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Indeed. I can stare right through people with mine. lol, well, to an extent, anyway.
Good write.

Re: A look inside the man (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 9th May 2004 @ 07:48:25 PM AEST
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A good write....Eyes always tell me what the lips fail to say..... and my eyes always give me away....
Jenni

Re: A look inside the man (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 01:47:29 PM AEST
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Windows of the souls they say. Well put. I really like the questioning style of this poem. Keep it up.
Take care.
David

Re: A look inside the man (User Rating: 1 )
by NightOwl on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 10:58:09 AM AEST
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Awesome poem!! It is something I can really relate to. And it sends out so much emotion!! You have true talent. Keep the faith, and God Bless.

*~Erin~*

Re: A look inside the man (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 27th February 2019 @ 02:56:33 PM AEST
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This is so great. I do have a feel for others pain and thoughts.This was real magic!

Re: A look inside the man (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Sunday, 26th November 2023 @ 07:27:23 PM AEST
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I came hear to read it again....

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