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Array ( [sid] => 45442 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Vanish From being [time] => 2004-04-29 17:34:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It takes but one touch until your broken
Only I will be the one to gather pieces fallen
I can’t fix what’s foreign to me
I can’t hold what I can’t see

If they look away
We can leave this lie behind
Through my eyes you’ll be again
Don’t hold back just come with me
Well run away unto the night
Come and we’ll drift away from sight

Once we’re gone I’ll feel you there
Maybe we still are dreaming
Only now it’s real
Follow me away from this life of hurting
They cant hold us if they’re not looking
If they leave us be we can still dream
Just don’t look back
Don’t look back

If they look away
We can leave this lie behind
Through my eyes you’ll be again
Don’t hold back just come with me
Well run away unto the night
Come and we’ll drift tonight

If they look away
We can leave this lie behind
Through my eyes you’ll be again
Don’t hold back just come with me
Well run away unto the night
Come and we’ll run at midnight

Live under my light again
You were all I wanted
Come fly with me again
We can finally disappear
This night is our own
This night alone
Run and don’t look back
We’ll never look back
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Soulless [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Vanish From being

Contributed by Soulless on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:34:46 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



It takes but one touch until your broken
Only I will be the one to gather pieces fallen
I can’t fix what’s foreign to me
I can’t hold what I can’t see

If they look away
We can leave this lie behind
Through my eyes you’ll be again
Don’t hold back just come with me
Well run away unto the night
Come and we’ll drift away from sight

Once we’re gone I’ll feel you there
Maybe we still are dreaming
Only now it’s real
Follow me away from this life of hurting
They cant hold us if they’re not looking
If they leave us be we can still dream
Just don’t look back
Don’t look back

If they look away
We can leave this lie behind
Through my eyes you’ll be again
Don’t hold back just come with me
Well run away unto the night
Come and we’ll drift tonight

If they look away
We can leave this lie behind
Through my eyes you’ll be again
Don’t hold back just come with me
Well run away unto the night
Come and we’ll run at midnight

Live under my light again
You were all I wanted
Come fly with me again
We can finally disappear
This night is our own
This night alone
Run and don’t look back
We’ll never look back




Copyright © Soulless ... [ 2004-04-29 17:34:46]
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Re: Vanish From being (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:45:58 PM AEST
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I can hear this being playeb by Stabbing Westward, this is good, I like it.


Re: Vanish From being (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 05:52:11 PM AEST
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This was great!

I was going to highlight one stanza to reflect upon but truthfully the whole poem was perfection.

Kie


Re: Vanish From being (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:08:12 PM AEST
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ohhhh dreamy and beautiful! to run off with the one you love, as im taking it, but it sort of has a sad quality to it, like the person wont go with you.... hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Vanish From being (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:54:11 PM AEST
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You seem to be writing a lot of dark poetry and you do it so well. I loved every line in this write.




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