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Array ( [sid] => 45412 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Saphire Tears [time] => 2004-04-29 14:27:45 [hometext] => Donald Titus, My great grandfather, died Monday, April 26 in digitywash while camping on his birthday. It was an anticipated heart attack. :'( [bodytext] => These saphire tears
I shead are for you
You were my best friend
As older i gre
But in my time
Of pain and fear
Your tender words and
Love are not near
Only you can
Fix my broken soul
Just sit back as
Life takes its toll
From the bottom
Of my heart i cry
Genuine saphire tears go by
Somehow I know
The reason why you left
So that we would know
How muched you love us
And how you let it show [comments] => 8 [counter] => 294 [topic] => 55 [informant] => SAT [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

Saphire Tears

Contributed by SAT on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:27:45 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

These saphire tears
I shead are for you
You were my best friend
As older i gre
But in my time
Of pain and fear
Your tender words and
Love are not near
Only you can
Fix my broken soul
Just sit back as
Life takes its toll
From the bottom
Of my heart i cry
Genuine saphire tears go by
Somehow I know
The reason why you left
So that we would know
How muched you love us
And how you let it show

Copyright © SAT ... [ 2004-04-29 14:27:45]
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Re: Saphire Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:29:33 PM AEST
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Good Poem.

~Brittany~

Re: Saphire Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:37:59 PM AEST
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my deepest sympaty, my thoughts are with you during this very hard time in your life.

Re: Saphire Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by tiny_mo on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:51:39 PM AEST
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This is a good poem. A very good way to let your pain out. I'm sorry about your grandfather. Mo

Re: Saphire Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:26:10 PM AEST
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My sympathies for your loss.The death of a loved one is never easy,but please know that time does heal certain wounds and that hopefully those tears will become smiles when you will realize how present he still is in your life and how much he's happy up there.Communicating soul-to-soul is so much stronger than face-to-face,nothing can stand in it's way and the bond becomes unbreakable.I really don't know what else to tell you to diminish your pain except offer you my deepest condolences.
Sincerely,
PumpkinPie

Re: Saphire Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:00:11 PM AEST
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SORRY ABOUT YOUR LOSS! YOU'VE EXPRESSED IT VERY WELL IN THIS POEM YOU WROTE FOR HIM!! DID A GREAT JOB
SAT!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!

Re: Saphire Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Lost_Shadow on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 03:59:25 AM AEST
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Thank you for your comment. My sympathies go a long way for your loss. May he rest in piece and may your souls reunite one day.

This is a very touching poem I enjoyed it.

Re: Saphire Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:39:27 PM AEST
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so so sad hun... i hope your doing ok.. if u need anything PM me...

Re: Saphire Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by SAT on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 08:07:38 PM AEST
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Thank you guys for the comments! I greatly appreciate all the support!

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