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Array ( [sid] => 45358 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => melancholy [time] => 2004-04-29 03:05:02 [hometext] => [bodytext] => oh give me a rhyme
and i'll give you my reason
oh fall use to be my favorite season

catching moonbeams from afar
tangled up in spiderwebs
seeking answers if i dare
i chose not to care
(i don't want to care)

this journey seems to go ever on
and now my home is so far away
how i always want you to say

enter persuasion:
loving promises spoken in hushed tones
and the dark knight's velvet lips traces fiery patterns upon my moonlit hips
loving promises soon to be broken

so slowly so softly Neptune dreams wrap me up in gossamer illusions
my sorrow somehow deepens

autumn whispers linger in the wind
your voice i will always follow
again only silence begins

catching moonbeams from afar
tangled up in spiderwebs
seeking answers if i dare
i chose not to care
(i don't want to care)

oh give me a rhyme
and i'll give you my reason
oh fall use to be my favorite season. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 64 [informant] => crystalnebulina [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )
melancholy

Contributed by crystalnebulina on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:05:02 AM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous



oh give me a rhyme
and i'll give you my reason
oh fall use to be my favorite season

catching moonbeams from afar
tangled up in spiderwebs
seeking answers if i dare
i chose not to care
(i don't want to care)

this journey seems to go ever on
and now my home is so far away
how i always want you to say

enter persuasion:
loving promises spoken in hushed tones
and the dark knight's velvet lips traces fiery patterns upon my moonlit hips
loving promises soon to be broken

so slowly so softly Neptune dreams wrap me up in gossamer illusions
my sorrow somehow deepens

autumn whispers linger in the wind
your voice i will always follow
again only silence begins

catching moonbeams from afar
tangled up in spiderwebs
seeking answers if i dare
i chose not to care
(i don't want to care)

oh give me a rhyme
and i'll give you my reason
oh fall use to be my favorite season.




Copyright © crystalnebulina ... [ 2004-04-29 03:05:02]
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Re: melancholy (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:38:51 AM AEST
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Truly melancholic..yet, beautifully captivating. venkat


Re: melancholy (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:50:02 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
Captured your subject well.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: melancholy (User Rating: 1 )
by Pompous on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:04:41 AM AEST
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beautiful poem...though it is quite sad
...Neal...


Re: melancholy (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:09:30 AM AEST
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A beautifull poem. such sadness sweet.


Re: melancholy (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 05:25:07 AM AEST
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very haunting ... lingers in your mind ...nice job
Pandora




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