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Array ( [sid] => 45356 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Vegas Streets Covered In Red [time] => 2004-04-29 02:14:14 [hometext] => For Shelby [bodytext] => Out in the desert, and out of the sand
I had risen with my clan
We were ten thousand strong,
And all was about to go wrong
We walked right into Vegas,
And left a trail of blood behind us
Right into the stardust, we had walked,
As eyes just stared and no one talked
Ten thousand we were, and another ten thousand we became
As we started up this bloodlust game
Blood started to fly, and people started to die
Hearts were ripped out, and held up high
And flesh was torn
As Vegas became covered in a red crimson sky
This is the first in three hundred years, that I have felt alive
As blood was all around, and bodies covered the ground
And souls were lifted high, into the midnight sky
My thirst for blood was not done, as I began to take every mother's son
Just before dawn, all of Vegas had been gone
As we cleaned out the city, and painted it all crimson pretty
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Vegas Streets Covered In Red

Contributed by Rylo on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:14:14 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Out in the desert, and out of the sand
I had risen with my clan
We were ten thousand strong,
And all was about to go wrong
We walked right into Vegas,
And left a trail of blood behind us
Right into the stardust, we had walked,
As eyes just stared and no one talked
Ten thousand we were, and another ten thousand we became
As we started up this bloodlust game
Blood started to fly, and people started to die
Hearts were ripped out, and held up high
And flesh was torn
As Vegas became covered in a red crimson sky
This is the first in three hundred years, that I have felt alive
As blood was all around, and bodies covered the ground
And souls were lifted high, into the midnight sky
My thirst for blood was not done, as I began to take every mother's son
Just before dawn, all of Vegas had been gone
As we cleaned out the city, and painted it all crimson pretty




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Re: Vegas Streets Covered In Red (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:17:48 AM AEST
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Vampires come to the desert I love it I do!! Sin City hasnt seen this one yet!! Great job on this one for sure.........Thanks Ron

Love ya

Michelle


Re: Vegas Streets Covered In Red (User Rating: 1 )
by Hyper on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:30:34 AM AEST
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Nice.


Re: Vegas Streets Covered In Red (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:57:46 AM AEST
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O.K. , I concur, a few selective bloodlettings here and there in Vegas might not be a bad idea, after all. Ypu did well, Ron. Even I like this. lol

Hugs,
Rita


Re: Vegas Streets Covered In Red (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:24:27 PM AEST
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I GOTTA SAY THAT ROCKS NON-STOP! IT WAS FILLED WITH ALOT OF IMAGINATION!!
YOU DID AN AWESOME JOB ON THIS RYLO!!!
DAN!!!!


Re: Vegas Streets Covered In Red (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 11:17:59 PM AEST
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Ron This Is Simply Amazing Dark Write
I Love It !!!!!!! Written Very Well :-)
*******LoVe**AnGeL*********
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