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Array ( [sid] => 45338 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My little buddy [time] => 2004-04-29 00:12:06 [hometext] => A poem I wrote for my 11 yr. old son. [bodytext] => When my son goes out to play,
he gets very muddy.
But I just wash that dirt off,
because he's my little buddy.

I come home from work tired
and he just wants to play.
But sometimes for my buddy,
I'll go out anyway.

I hate it when he's angry,
I hate it when he's sad.
So I try to make him smile,
because that's what makes me dad.

I try to teach him right from wrong
and do the best he can.
Some day he'll have his own son,
who might need a helping hand.

He's my little buddy
and he will always shine.
He's my little buddy
and I'm so glad he's mine.

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My little buddy

Contributed by skinsfan on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:12:06 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

When my son goes out to play,
he gets very muddy.
But I just wash that dirt off,
because he's my little buddy.

I come home from work tired
and he just wants to play.
But sometimes for my buddy,
I'll go out anyway.

I hate it when he's angry,
I hate it when he's sad.
So I try to make him smile,
because that's what makes me dad.

I try to teach him right from wrong
and do the best he can.
Some day he'll have his own son,
who might need a helping hand.

He's my little buddy
and he will always shine.
He's my little buddy
and I'm so glad he's mine.

Copyright © skinsfan ... [ 2004-04-29 00:12:06]
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Re: My little buddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:19:22 AM AEST
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Sounds like you are doing a terrific job to me. Everything you do he will remember and that is how he will treat his children. Love and respect them, that is the best thing you can do because it teaches it to them.

Wish more Dads would adopt this attitude.

Rita

Re: My little buddy (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:27:47 AM AEST
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and a great father u r. I agree with Rita.
Really good write, a masterpeice.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: My little buddy (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:45:16 AM AEST
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A very good poem I bet your son was tickled pink with this poem. Top marks for touching my heart.

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