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Array ( [sid] => 45317 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Magnetic Storm [time] => 2004-04-28 22:03:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Influenced by magic
Ensnaring the village in its wake
The Magnetic Storm encounters its lamentable victim;
Alluring her thoughts and emotions
Enslaving her to a transient moment of wretchedness.

Once illuminant candles - extinguished
Crystalline chandeliers collide with the ground - shattering
Drowning a nightmare world in ochre light.

Around her
Screaming above her
Roaring below her
Enchaining her in its mastery

The Magnetic Storm reaches into its capacity
Tormenting it's victim with harrowing memories
Captured from lost minds
Her heart slammed against her ribcage-
A trapped Bird
Immobolising her in her own solicitude
Scraping away at her mind
Rendering her senseless

Her voice crying for deliverance,
The last cruciating blow brought forward defeat.
She knew what lay beyond her unconcious refuge-
Waking up solitary in oblivion

Darker and deeper the heavy clouds sat,
Leaving a sky pouring crimson
A land lifting his head up once more. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cassandra [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Magnetic Storm

Contributed by Cassandra on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:03:37 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Influenced by magic
Ensnaring the village in its wake
The Magnetic Storm encounters its lamentable victim;
Alluring her thoughts and emotions
Enslaving her to a transient moment of wretchedness.

Once illuminant candles - extinguished
Crystalline chandeliers collide with the ground - shattering
Drowning a nightmare world in ochre light.

Around her
Screaming above her
Roaring below her
Enchaining her in its mastery

The Magnetic Storm reaches into its capacity
Tormenting it's victim with harrowing memories
Captured from lost minds
Her heart slammed against her ribcage-
A trapped Bird
Immobolising her in her own solicitude
Scraping away at her mind
Rendering her senseless

Her voice crying for deliverance,
The last cruciating blow brought forward defeat.
She knew what lay beyond her unconcious refuge-
Waking up solitary in oblivion

Darker and deeper the heavy clouds sat,
Leaving a sky pouring crimson
A land lifting his head up once more.

Copyright © Cassandra ... [ 2004-04-28 22:03:37]
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Re: Magnetic Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by PRECIOUSBECKY on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:51:26 PM AEST
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RIPPED AT MY SOUL
GREAT WRITE

Re: Magnetic Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:52:54 PM AEST
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This Is Really Good !!!!! Awesome Dark Write. Keep Em Coming !!!!! Welcome To Ypdc :-)
LoVe - AnGeL

Re: Magnetic Storm (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 10:55:31 PM AEST
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Oh Excuse Me LoL You've Been Here Just Haven't Been Posting Much I See !!! Sorry About That !!!!
Just Looked At The Date Of This Poem In Which It Was Posted Now I Feel Like A Complete Idiot LoL
LoVe - AnGeL

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