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[aid] => mick
[title] => +~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
[time] => 2004-04-28 21:07:44
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[bodytext] => Crimson roses lay on the silk bed sheets
next to a love letter
covered with blood,
you said your final goodbyes.
+~+~
You said you didn't want
to live without me anymore,
I sat on the edge of the bed and cried.
+~+~
I went to the bathroom
to wipe my mascara filled face,
and found you lying on the floor,
you had cut your throat
with a meat cleaver from the kitchen.
+~+~
I sat on the floor
next to your dead body,
I put your blood soaked head in my lap,
the crimson roses lie
on the silk bed sheets....
untouched.
+~+~
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.27/2004
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[score] => 41
[ratings] => 9
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => DarkPoetry
)
+~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
Contributed by
Cynthia
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:07:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Crimson roses lay on the silk bed sheets
next to a love letter
covered with blood,
you said your final goodbyes.
+~+~
You said you didn't want
to live without me anymore,
I sat on the edge of the bed and cried.
+~+~
I went to the bathroom
to wipe my mascara filled face,
and found you lying on the floor,
you had cut your throat
with a meat cleaver from the kitchen.
+~+~
I sat on the floor
next to your dead body,
I put your blood soaked head in my lap,
the crimson roses lie
on the silk bed sheets....
untouched.
+~+~
Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.27/2004
Copyright ©
Cynthia
... [
2004-04-28 21:07:44]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: +~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:11:18 PM AEST
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| So tragic. |
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Re: +~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
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by sugar0986 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:12:56 PM AEST
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oh, this is so sad.
~Brittany~ |
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Re: +~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:15:22 PM AEST
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I always read these poems of yours right before bed! Have mercy!
You have found your talent and you excel with these writes.
Excellent poem!
Kie |
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Re: +~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:16:31 PM AEST
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| Wow, this was so chilling. And tragic, well written. |
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Re: +~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:28:15 PM AEST
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Sis This Is So Sad And Chilling Write But Written So Well !!!!!!!!!!! I Like It.....
********LoVe**AnGeL*********
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Re: +~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:35:23 PM AEST
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A little morbid, maybe, but really well written, good descriptions.
Take care.
David |
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Re: +~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:51:13 PM AEST
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You and Arden are determined to leave me 'sleepless in Texas'. This is a good dark poem, but did you have to put his head in your lap?????? Yucky . . . blood is very dangerous, you know. You must always wear PPE's when handling any blood source. Shield your eyes and mouth and if at all possible wear a face mask. This has been a public service announcement.
Rita |
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Re: +~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
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by kidpoet_213 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:02:54 PM AEST
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Cynthia...
It's so dark... so morbid... so chilling... so tragic.. yet... IT'S SO AWESOMELY WRITTEN! WHOA!!
Girl... WOW!!! This is great... loved it... well written... my friend...
~Donna~ |
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Re: +~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
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by arden on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:07:37 PM AEST
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wooohooo 5 stars just for grossing rita out!!!
this was awesome girl.
loved it.
Arden |
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Re: +~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:27:21 PM AEST
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| Very dark but so well writen & done! Bravo! Christina |
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Re: +~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
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by Rylo on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:17:56 AM AEST
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| This was really good, I really enjoy reading your work. You have a way with the darkness, and I love that. Great job |
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Re: +~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
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by venkat on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 01:04:38 AM AEST
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| wow..wow..wow..astounding..makes me speechless. venkat |
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Re: +~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
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by Hurretje on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:19:18 AM AEST
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Very dark, but a brilliant read.
Greetz,
Hur |
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Re: +~+~ Crimson Roses ~+~+
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 08:54:03 PM AEST
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| Cynthia, you've created yet another masterpice. I am amazed as always by your talent. |
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