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Maybe I deserve a little more
He is so genuine and sweet,
Maybe he’s what I’ve been waiting for.

I want to hold me so badly
Just to know he’s there and real.
I want to hold his hand and kiss him
Just to see how his hands feel.

I’m scared to tell him though
Because I don’t know what he’ll say.
But I really like him so much
And it grows day by day

I love his hair, so thick and long
And his freckles, and his smile
I feel so strange around him
But his glow makes it worthwhile

Do I say too much?
Should I tell him more?
Does he like me too?
Why am I so torn?

Maybe he can heal my wounds
That have bled for much too long
And his love cannot come too soon
For he will never do me wrong.
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The Life at the End of My Tunnel

Contributed by kayald on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:24:42 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Maybe it’s time for something better,
Maybe I deserve a little more
He is so genuine and sweet,
Maybe he’s what I’ve been waiting for.

I want to hold me so badly
Just to know he’s there and real.
I want to hold his hand and kiss him
Just to see how his hands feel.

I’m scared to tell him though
Because I don’t know what he’ll say.
But I really like him so much
And it grows day by day

I love his hair, so thick and long
And his freckles, and his smile
I feel so strange around him
But his glow makes it worthwhile

Do I say too much?
Should I tell him more?
Does he like me too?
Why am I so torn?

Maybe he can heal my wounds
That have bled for much too long
And his love cannot come too soon
For he will never do me wrong.

Copyright © kayald ... [ 2004-04-28 19:24:42]
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Re: The Life at the End of My Tunnel (User Rating: 1 )
by eviegirl on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:21:18 PM AEST
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go for it, girl

Re: The Life at the End of My Tunnel (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:23:20 PM AEST
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Nicely said, And Asked.
I think if you feel this way, you should let him know. Most likely things will grow. And your smile will show him. God be with. Take care.

Re: The Life at the End of My Tunnel (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:20:03 PM AEST
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Good Poem.

~Brittany~

Re: The Life at the End of My Tunnel (User Rating: 1 )
by PumpkinPie on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:22:55 PM AEST
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The only way he could do you wrong is by not loving such a sweet person as you ! You should take the chance,you never know,but I know,it's easier said than done.Just remember that if anything ever happens that you didn't expect or want,you have all the beauty inside and out to attract a beautiful soul(and person!):o)Good luck and great poem!
PumpkinPie

Re: The Life at the End of My Tunnel (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:25:13 PM AEST
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I Say Go For It Tell Him Exactly How You Feel
About Him.... Don't Hold Back Nothing!!!!!!!!!!
You Go Girl Friend :-) Nicely Written :-)
*******LoVe**AnGeL*********
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