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Array ( [sid] => 45262 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => KEEP FOCUSED [time] => 2004-04-28 16:16:05 [hometext] => FOCUSING ON YOUR OWN GOAL, WILL KEEP YOU STRONG AND BOLD [bodytext] => You must watch who you hang around
Your life they can bring down
You must stay absolutely sure
Of what you're going to endure
Sometimes you might Just have to pray for that person
Because if you don't, your life can worsen
Don't let their feelings
Come into your dealings
Keep your distance
And be persistance
They must want to change
Your life you don't want to exchange
Pray with every ounce of your being
Until you see some freeing
You must stay focused on your goal
To save your own soul.

Gwendolyn Barden

Copyright ©2004 Gwendolyn Barden

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KEEP FOCUSED

Contributed by GODSBESTIMAGE on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:16:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

You must watch who you hang around
Your life they can bring down
You must stay absolutely sure
Of what you're going to endure
Sometimes you might Just have to pray for that person
Because if you don't, your life can worsen
Don't let their feelings
Come into your dealings
Keep your distance
And be persistance
They must want to change
Your life you don't want to exchange
Pray with every ounce of your being
Until you see some freeing
You must stay focused on your goal
To save your own soul.

Gwendolyn Barden

Copyright ©2004 Gwendolyn Barden

Copyright © GODSBESTIMAGE ... [ 2004-04-28 16:16:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: KEEP FOCUSED (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:36:49 PM AEST
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Well done, well written.

Re: KEEP FOCUSED (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:54:29 PM AEST
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a sermon for the masses.
thanks for sharing

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