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Array ( [sid] => 45251 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The thorns of a rose [time] => 2004-04-28 14:38:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => As I hang there
I see them smile
But my life means much more
I hear their laughter
As it all fades away
Under the thorns of a rose
Crimson blood down my face
they all look at me
with a great deal of discrace
As a saphire tear
Runs down my face
My ruby red lips
Are still spreding love
As I hide anger inside
Wich only feeds their selfish pride
We are all just slaves in this world
With our saphire tears
And crimson blood
Watching the pendulum swing
Under the thorns of a rose
In our own little nightmare [comments] => 4 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 43 [informant] => SAT [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
The thorns of a rose

Contributed by SAT on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:38:03 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



As I hang there
I see them smile
But my life means much more
I hear their laughter
As it all fades away
Under the thorns of a rose
Crimson blood down my face
they all look at me
with a great deal of discrace
As a saphire tear
Runs down my face
My ruby red lips
Are still spreding love
As I hide anger inside
Wich only feeds their selfish pride
We are all just slaves in this world
With our saphire tears
And crimson blood
Watching the pendulum swing
Under the thorns of a rose
In our own little nightmare




Copyright © SAT ... [ 2004-04-28 14:38:03]
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Re: The thorns of a rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:44:28 PM AEST
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Chilling....

quite chilling.....

"Watching the pendulum swing".... life can feel EXACTLY like that sometimes, doesn't it?

WOW... this is an awesome write ; )

God bless,
Ellen


Re: The thorns of a rose (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:02:24 PM AEST
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Wow! This was really good.

~Brittany~


Re: The thorns of a rose (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:42:22 PM AEST
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very nicely written


Re: The thorns of a rose (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:40:38 PM AEST
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so descriptive and full of anger and sadness....




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