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a body lies
the sad thing is
no one realised
No one mourns
And no one cries
And no one came
To say goodbye

6 ft down
And maggots feed
The sad thing is
She was in need
Of someone to care
Of some one to lead
Her out of her addiction
To self harm and to weed

6 ft under
An accident caused
Her lonely death
Only sadness before
Its tragic u think
But her life was so poor
No one new she'd died
What was her life for?

6ft beneath
Corpse is cold
She was so young
Only 16 years old
Her mind was bent
And her body was sold
A love-seeking hooker
Who cut deep down to her soul
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funeral

Contributed by spider on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:31:59 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

6 ft below
a body lies
the sad thing is
no one realised
No one mourns
And no one cries
And no one came
To say goodbye

6 ft down
And maggots feed
The sad thing is
She was in need
Of someone to care
Of some one to lead
Her out of her addiction
To self harm and to weed

6 ft under
An accident caused
Her lonely death
Only sadness before
Its tragic u think
But her life was so poor
No one new she'd died
What was her life for?

6ft beneath
Corpse is cold
She was so young
Only 16 years old
Her mind was bent
And her body was sold
A love-seeking hooker
Who cut deep down to her soul

Copyright © spider ... [ 2004-04-28 13:31:59]
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Re: funeral (User Rating: 1 )
by kailadragon on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:33:33 PM AEST
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wow, good write. keep 'em comin =)

Kaila
Dragon
Seonte

Re: funeral (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:50:23 PM AEST
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I agree with the last comment... this is so chillingly true... sad to think that this happens everyday in this world somewhere... but it does...
Great write... keep em comin'... this kind of poetry speaks volumes about our society today... thank u for sharing...
~Donna~

Re: funeral (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:10:13 PM AEST
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Wow! what a powerful poem. but so sad.
Good write.

~Brittany~

Re: funeral (User Rating: 1 )
by OMEGA_ on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:31:29 PM AEST
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Really woooooow
very amazing writting
well done...

Re: funeral (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:31:09 PM AEST
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!@**'g wow.............you should be proud!!!!......simple......shocking......cut throat........i loved it!!!!!

Re: funeral (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 12th May 2004 @ 04:22:11 PM AEST
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excellent:) hugs n' love nessa

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