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Array ( [sid] => 45240 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Finally Falling Apart [time] => 2004-04-28 13:15:24 [hometext] => PLEASE READ!! WAnt comments. If you cant forget someone out of your mind do they belong there? [bodytext] => i let me defense go down
because i thought it was safe
from all the distress and pain
but in the end thats all you gave

i opened up a part of my mind
which controlled all of my body
you entered so peacefull and safe
just to start to control me

so you made me hate you
you imputed thoughts in my mind
now that i know this
i would have never given you the time

i could of avoided the agony
of all the things you did
could of opened my eyes and saw
all the things you hid

you grabed my heart and squeezed
squeezing it full of pain
i cant believe the way you pulled me down
causing all of this strain

with this knife ill cut out the part of me
that ever cared for you
i will take my heart and repair it
and get myself through

then forget all my memories of us
erase the love in my heart
so goodbye noe im done
we will forever be apart
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 22 [informant] => jc_92024 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Finally Falling Apart

Contributed by jc_92024 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:15:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

i let me defense go down
because i thought it was safe
from all the distress and pain
but in the end thats all you gave

i opened up a part of my mind
which controlled all of my body
you entered so peacefull and safe
just to start to control me

so you made me hate you
you imputed thoughts in my mind
now that i know this
i would have never given you the time

i could of avoided the agony
of all the things you did
could of opened my eyes and saw
all the things you hid

you grabed my heart and squeezed
squeezing it full of pain
i cant believe the way you pulled me down
causing all of this strain

with this knife ill cut out the part of me
that ever cared for you
i will take my heart and repair it
and get myself through

then forget all my memories of us
erase the love in my heart
so goodbye noe im done
we will forever be apart

Copyright © jc_92024 ... [ 2004-04-28 13:15:24]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Finally Falling Apart (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:54:07 PM AEST
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This is really good, has a couple grammically errors that i can see (maybe they are meant to be there) But well done!

Re: Finally Falling Apart (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:12:18 PM AEST
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mmmm beautiful expression of feelings, my x just has re-entered my life and his being here has a weird effect, hang in there, keep writing:) hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Finally Falling Apart (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:12:50 PM AEST
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very strong sentiments - sometimes we let people into our hearts and end up getting really hurt - but that is experiencing life - taking chances - and maybe one time it will be worthwhile

merry

Re: Finally Falling Apart (User Rating: 1 )
by OMEGA_ on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:55:03 PM AEST
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i hove nothing to say more that WONDERFUL
well done

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