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To meet that wonderful kind heart
That pretty deep soul I always used to see from the start

Why do I hope you find yourself?

To see that sweet girl inside of you
To have the same great feelings I always used to

Why do I hope you find yourself?

To have that same joy I used to have
When you smile, when you panic, and when you laugh

Why do I hope you find yourself?

To give me those real pure feelings
That I always used to get from your deep hidden core
To give me those charming tender smiles
Those that make my heart jump and run thousands of miles

But this time will be by yourself
This time I wonâ€™t be the only one who can see
But also you will beâ€¦

Then you will come to be so free
Whispering in my ears those little sweet words:
â€œAfter I become myself no one else could beâ€¦ you are my friend, my love, and the only one for meâ€?

And thatâ€™s why I hope you find yourselfâ€¦ [comments] => 8 [counter] => 580 [topic] => 55 [informant] => OMEGA_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

And That's Why...

Contributed by OMEGA_ on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:11:50 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Why do I hope you find yourself?

To meet that wonderful kind heart
That pretty deep soul I always used to see from the start

Why do I hope you find yourself?

To see that sweet girl inside of you
To have the same great feelings I always used to

Why do I hope you find yourself?

To have that same joy I used to have
When you smile, when you panic, and when you laugh

Why do I hope you find yourself?

To give me those real pure feelings
That I always used to get from your deep hidden core
To give me those charming tender smiles
Those that make my heart jump and run thousands of miles

But this time will be by yourself
This time I wonâ€™t be the only one who can see
But also you will beâ€¦

Then you will come to be so free
Whispering in my ears those little sweet words:
â€œAfter I become myself no one else could beâ€¦ you are my friend, my love, and the only one for meâ€?

And thatâ€™s why I hope you find yourselfâ€¦

Copyright Â© OMEGA_ ... [ 2004-04-28 13:11:50]
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Re: And That's Why... (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:04:17 PM AEST
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well done.
i liked it.
Arden

Re: And That's Why... (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:56:17 PM AEST
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This is lovely. I hope the very blessed lady enjoys it as much as I did.
Stitch

Re: And That's Why... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:11:09 PM AEST
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Hello Omega and welcome to YPDC.

You should give this to the special lady you wrote this for because it is very loving and sweet.

I was impressed with your poem.

Kie

Re: And That's Why... (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 05:29:04 PM AEST
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Another wonderful write, Omega... Just beautiful and sweet and breath taking.

Lindsey

Re: And That's Why... (User Rating: 1 )
by TheRaven on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:04:16 PM AEST
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Very nice write. I think this deserves to be read by the person you wrote it for. It would be very appreciated I bet. Again, nice job.

Re: And That's Why... (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:35:45 AM AEST
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Aah..very good flow..excellent freeverse.
beautifully romantic.. venkat

Re: And That's Why... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:51:48 PM AEST
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Beautifull and I hope she finds herself.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: And That's Why... (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:25:28 AM AEST
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This was beautiful...It touched me so because, once upon a time these words should of been serenaded to me..

Thank you

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