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Array ( [sid] => 45236 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Behind Closed Doors [time] => 2004-04-28 13:00:52 [hometext] => where we are kept [bodytext] => My body is weakening, skins getting slack
Blood is thinning, nails turning black
Hair falling out, in clumps, not just a strand
Teeth decaying, mouth dry as sand

You lock me away, part of a hideous tribe
That mustn't be seen, we're freaks we must hide
Behind closed doors, in our own colony
Like walking dead, rotting a bit more each day

Cuts that just fester, pus filled stench
Constant groaning, from guts that do wrench
You feed us some scraps, not fit for a hound
Like animals we are, as we feed of the ground

You caused this disease, meddling with science
Trying to mutate, in total defiance
You will pay for, your experiment ill fated
By rotting in hell, with us monsters you created [comments] => 3 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 13 [informant] => parkman [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Behind Closed Doors

Contributed by parkman on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:00:52 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My body is weakening, skins getting slack
Blood is thinning, nails turning black
Hair falling out, in clumps, not just a strand
Teeth decaying, mouth dry as sand

You lock me away, part of a hideous tribe
That mustn't be seen, we're freaks we must hide
Behind closed doors, in our own colony
Like walking dead, rotting a bit more each day

Cuts that just fester, pus filled stench
Constant groaning, from guts that do wrench
You feed us some scraps, not fit for a hound
Like animals we are, as we feed of the ground

You caused this disease, meddling with science
Trying to mutate, in total defiance
You will pay for, your experiment ill fated
By rotting in hell, with us monsters you created

Copyright © parkman ... [ 2004-04-28 13:00:52]
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Re: Behind Closed Doors (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:45:54 PM AEST
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Good write! Powerful! Great work!

Re: Behind Closed Doors (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:39:13 PM AEST
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Very Powerfull, Good Write.

~Brittany~

Re: Behind Closed Doors (User Rating: 1 )
by eviegirl on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:27:27 PM AEST
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that will definetly turn some heads. great work. very powerful

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