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Array ( [sid] => 45234 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You come in first [time] => 2004-04-28 12:42:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You come in first when it’s all empty
And you get started on getting your work done

There are mounting problems,
All that you dreaded that wouldn’t happen, is happening
But there’s no time to be whining
You’ve got to string it all together and make it happen

Listening to that 1 note of Hordes is satisfaction enough
Enough to send shivers down your spine and give you goosebumps
And bring a smile on that harassed face

There’s a certain beauty to the output that results
When some musicians get together and they begin to gel onstage
And understand and work with each other
To create the sound

Folks must wonder why you do it
But I know for sure that it’s worth every little bit
Listening now and looking back, only the good remains
And makes the trip all worthwhile
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 44 [informant] => Quarryking [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Nostalgic )

You come in first

Contributed by Quarryking on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 12:42:15 PM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

You come in first when it’s all empty
And you get started on getting your work done

There are mounting problems,
All that you dreaded that wouldn’t happen, is happening
But there’s no time to be whining
You’ve got to string it all together and make it happen

Listening to that 1 note of Hordes is satisfaction enough
Enough to send shivers down your spine and give you goosebumps
And bring a smile on that harassed face

There’s a certain beauty to the output that results
When some musicians get together and they begin to gel onstage
And understand and work with each other
To create the sound

Folks must wonder why you do it
But I know for sure that it’s worth every little bit
Listening now and looking back, only the good remains
And makes the trip all worthwhile

Copyright © Quarryking ... [ 2004-04-28 12:42:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: You come in first (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:46:34 PM AEST
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"only the good remains
And makes the trip all worthwhile"

this is so true!!

Re: You come in first (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 11:41:45 PM AEST
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folks will always wonder when they haven't felt that wordless song yet unsung.
nice
here's to future sets that gel
thanks for sharing

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