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Walking that long drawn out road.
Eyes not quite narrowed.
Tears of pressure consuming my mind.
Just so messed up and blind
Only just noticing the cracks.
Having strange little attacks.
Pressure is my little demon.
Seem to forget I’m only human.
Even though I maybe strong, I’ve got no rock
Does this come as a shock.
I strive to survive this time period.
Never to be doubted.
I’m always that friendly voice that needs to be heard.
Every time you’re, expected to be answered.
Sorry not this time, I’m the on that needs a friendly voice.
So you got no choice.
I’m not here to listen to you.
All I’ll do is give you a tissue.
I just need to leave.
To achieve,
Where I’m meant to end up.
So I don’t completely crack up.

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Pressure is my demon

Contributed by little_genna on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:25:40 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Walking that long drawn out road.
Eyes not quite narrowed.
Tears of pressure consuming my mind.
Just so messed up and blind
Only just noticing the cracks.
Having strange little attacks.
Pressure is my little demon.
Seem to forget I’m only human.
Even though I maybe strong, I’ve got no rock
Does this come as a shock.
I strive to survive this time period.
Never to be doubted.
I’m always that friendly voice that needs to be heard.
Every time you’re, expected to be answered.
Sorry not this time, I’m the on that needs a friendly voice.
So you got no choice.
I’m not here to listen to you.
All I’ll do is give you a tissue.
I just need to leave.
To achieve,
Where I’m meant to end up.
So I don’t completely crack up.

Copyright © little_genna ... [ 2004-04-28 11:25:40]
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Re: Pressure is my demon (User Rating: 1 )
by lonely_kakashi on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:33:47 AM AEST
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well you know im here, if you want a rock, i'll always b here

luv
Kakashi
:D
xx

Re: Pressure is my demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:42:06 AM AEST
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I can understand plaintively what pressure tends to do either authoritarian or peer, I have been there once..in that pressure cooker demesne. But strangely for me at least, I would give anything to go boack into those school days...troubled but less fatal than in my real life nowadays. Struggle on dear friend for the learnings and experience in school are a foundation to future's repast... and you might not believe me but sometime you will miss all this. If life is hard now learn of it and your hidded strenghts...I am sure you have them to help you master your fates... otherwise and in other ways I must admit a good write this is..in my opinions at least. A quaint picture of a schoolgoer in all glory and tensions spent... may your days be nicer and may sweet sleep help to mend your tired days.

Re: Pressure is my demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Lost_Shadow on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:44:00 PM AEST
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Nice one... it reminds me about the road of life...the one I seem to be going down hill to...

,..-'the shadow'-...,

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