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Array ( [sid] => 45209 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If You Ever Asked A Soldier [time] => 2004-04-28 09:36:03 [hometext] => Some meanderings inspired by a conversation scripted in the movie [bodytext] => If you ever asked a soldier
as to why did he went to war
to fight and die in foreign corners
why do they relish this horrible endeavour

though not accurate in all the census
what you will hear will echo familiar
the answer most likely that you will hear
is perhaps delivered in this exact temper

it is not my wish to become a soldier
nor my ambition to kill and conquer
I am for the most a man as equal
as any that walked through life's adventure

but I always have this curious tingle
whenever I sing the national anthem
as I lift my sight to the the national flag
I felt these tuggings in my heart's bosom

I am not really brave though not a coward either
but I would if asked probably with vigor
lay down my life for pride and granduer
fighting to the end against scourge and terrors

for deep within my core my very being
sits a boy with his wooden sword unsheathing
with visions of glory that war does bring
the dedication to duty that my heart does cling

but above and beyond my childish fancy
is strangely enough my belief in serenity
I truly believe that for the sake of posterity
I will lay my life and partake in savagery

another anchor to my dreams of soldiers
is my belief in fellow men in valor and honor
for there is to me no greater honor
then to stand with another in glorious valor

for the true meaning of the word soldier
the true calling of the word honor
is perhaps the men you stand beside of
at that lonely hour when the need is most dire [comments] => 4 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Baronhawk [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
If You Ever Asked A Soldier

Contributed by Baronhawk on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:36:03 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



If you ever asked a soldier
as to why did he went to war
to fight and die in foreign corners
why do they relish this horrible endeavour

though not accurate in all the census
what you will hear will echo familiar
the answer most likely that you will hear
is perhaps delivered in this exact temper

it is not my wish to become a soldier
nor my ambition to kill and conquer
I am for the most a man as equal
as any that walked through life's adventure

but I always have this curious tingle
whenever I sing the national anthem
as I lift my sight to the the national flag
I felt these tuggings in my heart's bosom

I am not really brave though not a coward either
but I would if asked probably with vigor
lay down my life for pride and granduer
fighting to the end against scourge and terrors

for deep within my core my very being
sits a boy with his wooden sword unsheathing
with visions of glory that war does bring
the dedication to duty that my heart does cling

but above and beyond my childish fancy
is strangely enough my belief in serenity
I truly believe that for the sake of posterity
I will lay my life and partake in savagery

another anchor to my dreams of soldiers
is my belief in fellow men in valor and honor
for there is to me no greater honor
then to stand with another in glorious valor

for the true meaning of the word soldier
the true calling of the word honor
is perhaps the men you stand beside of
at that lonely hour when the need is most dire




Copyright © Baronhawk ... [ 2004-04-28 09:36:03]
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Re: If You Ever Asked A Soldier (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:37:56 AM AEST
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Missing comments in the textual headings.... a conversation scripted in the movie "Blackhawk Down"


Re: If You Ever Asked A Soldier (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:00:35 AM AEST
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If you used parenthesis in your comments it will not show the subject matter. Didn't know if you knew that.

Anyway I liked this poem alot. I have seen the movie as well as an exposé on the history channel.

"for deep within my core my very being
sits a boy with his wooden sword unsheathing
with visions of glory that war does bring
the dedication to duty that my heart does cling"

This was my favorite stanza.

Very nice poem to read Baronhawk.

Kie





Re: If You Ever Asked A Soldier (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 12:53:28 AM AEST
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very nice poem..truth and sincerity shines here..venkat


Re: If You Ever Asked A Soldier (User Rating: 1 )
by Qohinoor on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 10:18:45 PM AEST
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I have at least 3 works on war and soldiers, many of them are quite old and at the bottom at the stack. Mungkin saudara ingin memeriksa mereka?

Namun terima kasih saya mengucapkan atas kesudian saudara untuk berkongsikan puisi saudara dengan kita.




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