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Array ( [sid] => 45205 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ALl Alone [time] => 2004-04-28 09:11:56 [hometext] => For my first love. [bodytext] => Stars shining through my window
I wonder if the stars are shining on you
The sun's gone to sleep
Though I'm still awake
I wonder if your eyes are open too
Lips longing to feel yours
Skin longing to touch yours
I'm longing for your voice in my ear
All I have left are the memories
And anything you felt you no longer feel for me
Your shadow lingers on my walls
Although your body's long gone
The way you once loved me echoes in this room
The way we laughed and smiled, kissed and touched
But what hurts the most is you lied
You left me all alone in love
And it still haunts my heart
Time will continue to pass
And in time I'll forgive
But I will never forget [comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 48 [informant] => crackerjack [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

ALl Alone

Contributed by crackerjack on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:11:56 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Stars shining through my window
I wonder if the stars are shining on you
The sun's gone to sleep
Though I'm still awake
I wonder if your eyes are open too
Lips longing to feel yours
Skin longing to touch yours
I'm longing for your voice in my ear
All I have left are the memories
And anything you felt you no longer feel for me
Your shadow lingers on my walls
Although your body's long gone
The way you once loved me echoes in this room
The way we laughed and smiled, kissed and touched
But what hurts the most is you lied
You left me all alone in love
And it still haunts my heart
Time will continue to pass
And in time I'll forgive
But I will never forget

Copyright © crackerjack ... [ 2004-04-28 09:11:56]
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Re: ALl Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:22:42 AM AEST
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Hello and a warm welcome to YPDC.
I thought your poem was incredible.
Nostalgic, painful, loving and romantic.
Love can be painful at times.

I enjoyed reading this poem so much and I thank you for sharing it with us.

If you need any help with the site just ask anybody---we are all one big family here.

Kie

Re: ALl Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 11:23:12 AM AEST
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wow what a wonderful poem. this is really beautiful in such a sad way. well done and welcome to YPDC.

love and hugs
XgenX

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