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Array ( [sid] => 45185 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Saved By The Mom [time] => 2004-04-28 01:30:43 [hometext] => its simple. i can depend on my mom to save me anyday. very sentimental to me. [bodytext] => the lights are out
no one is here

except me and my knife
and endless fear

of what has been
what will be

no life, just death
and tragedy

the blade hits my skin
instant release

cutting deeper, hitting veins
no sense of ease

blood flowing swiftly
head feeling light

sweet release
its over tonight

the lights come on
mom walks in

sees the blood
on my skin

crying starts
feelings of guilt

internal flower of life
begins to wilt

the light grows dim
and soon disappears

im alone in my mind
yet surrounded in fears

the light returns
time has rushed by

im in the hospital
mom wont let me die

i love u mom... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 32 [informant] => superash16 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Saved By The Mom

Contributed by superash16 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 01:30:43 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

the lights are out
no one is here

except me and my knife
and endless fear

of what has been
what will be

no life, just death
and tragedy

the blade hits my skin
instant release

cutting deeper, hitting veins
no sense of ease

blood flowing swiftly
head feeling light

sweet release
its over tonight

the lights come on
mom walks in

sees the blood
on my skin

crying starts
feelings of guilt

internal flower of life
begins to wilt

the light grows dim
and soon disappears

im alone in my mind
yet surrounded in fears

the light returns
time has rushed by

im in the hospital
mom wont let me die

i love u mom...

Copyright © superash16 ... [ 2004-04-28 01:30:43]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Saved By The Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by EvaRee on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:12:52 AM AEST
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very powerful...very well done, excellent work...wow

Re: Saved By The Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by blackmarker on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:45:48 PM AEST
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Awww. thats so sweet!
Sad.. but it turns out sweet.
Great job!

Re: Saved By The Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Remi on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:53:06 PM AEST
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well u are her baby it a mother nature instict to protect their children mother always will, always do so that sweet that she their for u

remi

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