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new at this
Contributed by
wil_ca
on
Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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the sexy sparkle in your eyes
is more than enough
the elegant way you walk
and the beautiful way you talk
is more than anyone can ask for
But the way we kiss
is a sensational bliss
"love" Im new at this
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wil_ca
... [
2002-10-01 15:30:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: new at this
(User Rating: 1 ) by Lia on
Tuesday, 1st October 2002 @ 11:46:34 PM AEST (User
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Awww we are never 'new' at love. Just most of us choose to wander around with our eyes closed...seems yours are wide open now! |
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Re: new at this
(User Rating: 1 ) by WordPoet on
Wednesday, 2nd October 2002 @ 06:24:21 AM AEST (User
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Interesting twist and style. Nice job. |
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Re: new at this
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd October 2002 @ 02:16:59 PM AEST (User
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good job. I enjoyed
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Re: new at this
(User Rating: 1 ) by S_K_Williamson on
Thursday, 3rd October 2002 @ 07:15:12 PM AEST (User
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Well done.
Sharon;) |
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