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Array ( [sid] => 45167 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Everlasting Tears [time] => 2004-04-27 22:25:50 [hometext] => Yay! My first poem since joining the dark realm and my new little family lol. [bodytext] => Evil floating in the air
Flowing through her black-eyed stare

Insanity swirling in her eyes
Laughing with glee at their pain-filled cries

Her mind twisted and broken
Joyful at every sobbing plea spoken

Licking blood from her fingers
While the shadow in her mind lingers

Plunging the blade through skin and bone
Watching the crimson river flow down to the stone

The screams slowly fade away
And upon the soft earth they silently lay

Sitting with them tucked in her embrace
She sways to the music, tears running down her face

Bestowing cold kisses upon their heads,
She places them in their eternal beds

Forevermore they shall sleep
And everlasting tears she shall weep [comments] => 8 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 13 [informant] => JadedExistence [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Everlasting Tears

Contributed by JadedExistence on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:25:50 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Evil floating in the air
Flowing through her black-eyed stare

Insanity swirling in her eyes
Laughing with glee at their pain-filled cries

Her mind twisted and broken
Joyful at every sobbing plea spoken

Licking blood from her fingers
While the shadow in her mind lingers

Plunging the blade through skin and bone
Watching the crimson river flow down to the stone

The screams slowly fade away
And upon the soft earth they silently lay

Sitting with them tucked in her embrace
She sways to the music, tears running down her face

Bestowing cold kisses upon their heads,
She places them in their eternal beds

Forevermore they shall sleep
And everlasting tears she shall weep

Copyright © JadedExistence ... [ 2004-04-27 22:25:50]
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Re: Everlasting Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:31:42 PM AEST
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Great poem, chilling, seriously, the hairs are standing on my arm. All these lines had such an intense effect. Yay for dark poets !! :)

Re: Everlasting Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:37:06 PM AEST
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whoa, this sounds like somthing i would write.
i loved this.
perfect rhyme.
well done.
welcome to my dark realm my child...

Queen of Darkness..

Re: Everlasting Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:37:19 PM AEST
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wonderfully dark, welcome to the realm heh, hugs n' love nessa

@->>->-your first black rose

Re: Everlasting Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by devil_child on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:43:57 PM AEST
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AWSOME POEM! really enjoyed reading it

Re: Everlasting Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 11:15:40 PM AEST
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Much like the heat of the battle....I like it

thanks

Re: Everlasting Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 11:38:22 PM AEST
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This is good, too good for a first timer, you sure you're not into the gothic scene?

Re: Everlasting Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by parkman on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:14:48 AM AEST
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Excellent and chilling, most enjoyable, welcome to the darkerside of life

Re: Everlasting Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:34:47 AM AEST
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Jaded, for a first this is perfection! The rhyming is excellent, the style superb... The darkness so DEEP and DESTROYING. You have definitely left your mark. :)

Lindsey

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