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Array ( [sid] => 45147 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Perfect Girl [time] => 2004-04-27 20:24:12 [hometext] => This is a poem I wrote a while ago. The stupid guy thought I was a trophy. [bodytext] => Forgive me,
I can't be your perfect girl,
I'm not what you want so you
lie to me.
All the sweet lies you told me all the harmless promises,
You son of a b**** why say what
you say.
I'm not what you want I'm
leaving you
You thought I wouldn't run
Well you were wrong.

Give me room to breath
I don't like your jealousie
You go crazy over me
I'm not your perfect girl
I'm leaving to be me
when you see me at everybody else's arm
I don't want to hear it,
I'm not your perfect girl.

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Perfect Girl

Contributed by eviegirl on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:24:12 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Forgive me,
I can't be your perfect girl,
I'm not what you want so you
lie to me.
All the sweet lies you told me all the harmless promises,
You son of a b**** why say what
you say.
I'm not what you want I'm
leaving you
You thought I wouldn't run
Well you were wrong.

Give me room to breath
I don't like your jealousie
You go crazy over me
I'm not your perfect girl
I'm leaving to be me
when you see me at everybody else's arm
I don't want to hear it,
I'm not your perfect girl.





Copyright © eviegirl ... [ 2004-04-27 20:24:12]
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Re: Perfect Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 08:37:49 PM AEST
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sounds like the dick my fiance dated after we had broke up. i hate men like that, they give the rest of us a bad image.


Re: Perfect Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:13:09 AM AEST
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Sounds like a pretty stupid guy. I hope you find someone who will treat you really well. Good write. Great expression of your feelings.
- Stacy


Re: Perfect Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:33:20 PM AEST
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Why do some guys think like that? But this was a good poem.

~Brittany~




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