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Array ( [sid] => 45132 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bursting [time] => 2004-04-27 18:50:50 [hometext] => Argh, Couldnt think of a good title to desribe this poem, its basiclly about how i feel. Its a bit of a mish mash. Anyway comments welcomed [bodytext] => So much love i have for you,
it overflows my body, mind and soul,
i can not help it leak out,
theres so much it hurts,
bursting out of every fibre in my body.

I just need to know your safe,
to know you have not done wrong,
i just want you in my arms,
to know that im ok.

I feel a deep pain deep inside of me,
its the love, the love i feel for thee.

I can not help it,
i can not stop myself,
i should know better,
i should trust you i know.

Yet when my heart beats that little faster,
my mind becomes mash,
all the things that keep me safe,
are broken into a milion pieces,
and i bungle things out.

I want to trust you,
i really do,
yet sour memories remain,
of a past we wish to forget.

Only thing that keeps me sane,
are the hugs i get from you,
They tell me that im ok,
They tell me no to fret,
and they make me forget. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 55 [informant] => lonely_kakashi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Bursting

Contributed by lonely_kakashi on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:50:50 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



So much love i have for you,
it overflows my body, mind and soul,
i can not help it leak out,
theres so much it hurts,
bursting out of every fibre in my body.

I just need to know your safe,
to know you have not done wrong,
i just want you in my arms,
to know that im ok.

I feel a deep pain deep inside of me,
its the love, the love i feel for thee.

I can not help it,
i can not stop myself,
i should know better,
i should trust you i know.

Yet when my heart beats that little faster,
my mind becomes mash,
all the things that keep me safe,
are broken into a milion pieces,
and i bungle things out.

I want to trust you,
i really do,
yet sour memories remain,
of a past we wish to forget.

Only thing that keeps me sane,
are the hugs i get from you,
They tell me that im ok,
They tell me no to fret,
and they make me forget.




Copyright © lonely_kakashi ... [ 2004-04-27 18:50:50]
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Re: Bursting (User Rating: 1 )
by TokenBad on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:53:27 PM AEST
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Very interesting flow to it. Like when people just let their true emotions flow and are able to post it to words. Great work


Re: Bursting (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:21:30 AM AEST
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i really love the last stanza. its just beautiful. just as you seem to think i am even when im a broken down wreck.


Re: Bursting (User Rating: 1 )
by Lost_Shadow on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 04:31:55 AM AEST
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wow, I'm impressed this is your best so far now to read the ones after keep up the good work m8


Re: Bursting (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:01:24 PM AEST
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nice.
I want to trust you,
i really do,
yet sour memories remain,
of a past we wish to forget.




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