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Array ( [sid] => 45122 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => **You Give Me A Reason To Go On [time] => 2004-04-27 17:59:14 [hometext] => meh [bodytext] => i look at you most every single day,
you are so beautiful what more can i say.
i love your look, your smile, your hair, your touch,
why can't you see i love you so much.
but it's ok i'm getting over you,
i know by now you don't love me too.
it hurts so much, just feeling like this,
i hurt so much i want to slit my own wrists.
i know i shouldn't you tell me i shouldn't,
i always say i will, i go to start and i just couldn't.
i know how you'd feel and i don't want you sad,
and i'll do anything so you don't feel bad.
so when ever i think that i just want to die,
i just sit and imagine you when you cry.
it gives me a reason to go on one more day,
but there's no need to worry everything is ok. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 22 [informant] => justjames [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

**You Give Me A Reason To Go On

Contributed by justjames on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:59:14 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

i look at you most every single day,
you are so beautiful what more can i say.
i love your look, your smile, your hair, your touch,
why can't you see i love you so much.
but it's ok i'm getting over you,
i know by now you don't love me too.
it hurts so much, just feeling like this,
i hurt so much i want to slit my own wrists.
i know i shouldn't you tell me i shouldn't,
i always say i will, i go to start and i just couldn't.
i know how you'd feel and i don't want you sad,
and i'll do anything so you don't feel bad.
so when ever i think that i just want to die,
i just sit and imagine you when you cry.
it gives me a reason to go on one more day,
but there's no need to worry everything is ok.

Copyright © justjames ... [ 2004-04-27 17:59:14]
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Re: **You Give Me A Reason To Go On (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:03:24 PM AEST
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awww, this is sad, but sweet at the same time. Good Poem though.

~Brittany~

Re: **You Give Me A Reason To Go On (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:14:43 PM AEST
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i'm soo sad knowing that a stupid boy makes you feel soo sad. i know that to you he is not stupid but please never ever ever do that to yourself, you don't realize how much you affect the world and how much everyone needs you! i have a friend who killed herself, and i miss and think about her everyday. i wish i could have done somthing, anything to have helped her, but it's too late. so i hope that somehow i can influence you, even though nothing i can say will make you change the way you feel about this boy, just know there are soo many people who's lives you will affect, that love you, and choose to live not only for them but yourself.

Re: **You Give Me A Reason To Go On (User Rating: 1 )
by justjames on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 07:41:40 PM AEST
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ok, to that comment above, thank you, and by the way i am a guy and she is a girl

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